[FIC] Last Present- UruhaxAoi

[rukippe_yuu]

Title: Last Present
Chapters: 1/?
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[mayas_lover]

keep on writing! i'll read more! :'D

[rukippe_yuu]

hai!! >.< saankyuu!!

[paint_pops]

hi!
sounds interesting!
please write more ^^

[rukippe_yuu]

:D thanks!! i'll try..

[sekiryu]

Uhhmmm...maybe you can get it beta-ed? It's ok the way it is, just sometimes a beta can spot mistakes that sometimes the author missed themselves...

This is good. you should keep writing, but I sorta get the feeling that this is a bit rushed. I mean the story line is moving a bit too fast for a first chapter, don't you think? Unless of course, that was intentional, and the whole story will be revolving around that, but yeah...a bit too fast moving.

And totally off tangent, but do you think you can sign off your entries with your name or something, cuz, if i'm not mistaken, this lj is shared between 3 ppl right? and I sorta had quite a bit of a trouble trying to keep up with who's work is which... *fails* sorry m(_ _)m

[rukippe_yuu]

ahh :) get it beta-ed..i'll go get her *runs to the beta girl*.. i'll get her to check for mistakes.. i got one but she likes reading than spotting mistakes~ XDD

fufu~ i'll try make it slower.. >.< im always like this..rushing to the end.. gomen!!!

ouh...about this 3 diff people, we use 3 different person as icon.. those posts with aoi icons is me, another person is using uruha, and the other one person is using ruki.. m(_ _)m sorry for making this so complicated!! >.

[sekiryu]

LOL...I got one of those too...she'd rather read than actually beta-ing my fic ^^"

Well...it's ok, it's just better not to rush the flow too much...or it'll become something like the 'Twilight' movie... ^^"

Oh...okay, thanks for clearing that up...I fail at that kind of things and only notice it when ppl points it out to me, really sorry about that ^^"

[rukippe_yuu]

hai2!! ( ^o')b i'll try my best to keep it slow so people can feel it more while reading..

its ok.. ;D