Comments | rules1through8: FIC: Tomorrow, In A Year

rules1through8

FIC: Tomorrow, In A Year

Feb 26, 2014 11:42

Title: Tomorrow, In A Year
Fandom: RPFS, K-Pop, Nine Muses
Pairing: Hyuna/Sera
Rating: PG-13
Notes: amnesty! prompt post 5 at unnideul
AO3

( love of mine, someday you will die )

pairing: sera/hyuna, fic, group: nine muses

Comments 17

jayunch February 26 2014, 21:06:33 UTC

I'M GOING TO HIT YOU, THIS WAS NOT OK FOR MY HEART.

rules1through8 March 1 2014, 01:49:16 UTC

LOVE YOU TOO. <3

theagonyofblank February 26 2014, 23:04:33 UTC

Okay, at first, I thought this was amnesia!fic and was going to scream, but then I find out it's this and-- I'M SCREAMING. This is wonderful and lovely and tugged at my heartstrings, and I loved that Hyuna always recognized Sera (not really, but y'know), how she noticed the way Sera got sad sometimes, and "Take me with you." and "Finding love an infinite number of times." - that line there was really what did me in.

rules1through8 March 1 2014, 01:51:23 UTC

we can scream at each other. \o/

i'm glad you liked it! i was afraid it was going to come across as really... choppy and with weird flow. bc i chop. and i don't flow. \o/

theagonyofblank March 2 2014, 17:34:59 UTC

UGH NO IT WAS PERFECT GO AWAY

fourcoldpaws February 27 2014, 00:13:49 UTC

omg, this is so nice ;;

i think more about why hyuna's being reborn than why sera is immortal tbh. if she ever came across her at an untimely time, like when she was very little or very old. then again, i thought, sera is too very old so maybe she wouldn't mind that. (maybe it gets harder and harder to be with the hyunas because there's things that come with being so old, you have seen things and felt things and know things regular people never come to, the gap is growing and maybe at some point you're barely human anymore.)

rules1through8 March 1 2014, 02:03:48 UTC

thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it!

the gap is growing and maybe at some point you're barely human anymore

ahh yes, i like this and i like you. i feel like if sera had run into hyuna when their ages didn't really "match up", i think she would've just stuck around in the background and watch hyuna live out her life until she died again.

hyemint February 28 2014, 00:56:29 UTC

ahhhhh, this, i'm so ;~; at hyuna finding sera with each reincarnation /clutches my heart

this was really lovely ♥

rules1through8 March 1 2014, 02:04:11 UTC

thank you so much, you make me clutch my heart!

sparksfly7 February 28 2014, 06:48:49 UTC

yo so like, you know i don't even read 9muses fic, but i read yours because--it's yours. and this is really lovely! i'm so incredibly jealous of how much you can express in so little words. i have to go on and on, but you can just tell a whole story in <1.5k and it's fabulous. i love some of the passages here, like "Take me with you," Hyuna murmurs sleepily. "Wherever you go next, take me with you." and "No, this," she whispers, mouth brushing lightly against her bottom lip. "Finding love an infinite number of times."

btw it's been kind of bothering me - who is in your icon??

rules1through8 March 1 2014, 02:06:45 UTC

aww look at you venturing out of your snsd bubble. i'm glad you liked it! i always feel like i write too little so i'm glad that you think i was able to get the point across.

the icon is the love of my life, ryu sera. really now alice, get on the gravy boat.

sparksfly7 March 1 2014, 03:01:44 UTC

only for you, unnie ♥

if you think you write too little THEN WRITE MORE, WRITE SOME (SNSD) LONG FIC AND BEAUTIFY THE WORLD.

when i first saw it for 2 secs i thought it was Tiffany xD then i just didn't know. hey i'm pretty sure you've switched between the love of your life a couple of times.