Photosynthesis Part 5

Apr 08, 2010 19:53

Title: Photosynthesis Part 5
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jacob, vampires, pg-13, photosynthesis, edward, au

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charlie_jae June 29 2010, 22:30:28 UTC
Ok, I think I can honestly say this is a first. I was and still am a little confused why the pack from the rest attacked. So that is still in the back of my head. Nearly gave me a heart attack at the beginning of this chapter, lol. Than I realized, hello, dreamin.

I like how things are slowly but surely coming together.

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ruleto July 3 2010, 01:24:07 UTC
More shall be explained in the next chapter!

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lovemochi May 21 2011, 07:25:22 UTC
Ah, oh no Edward's jealous!! >.<

Oh, the beginning was GOOD. I loved the Mike/Jacob bit. That was hot! And the wolf by his bed thing must have freaked him out, especially while him and Edward were going at it! LMFAO!

Haha, typical Alice to play dress up on her men! :D I'm guessing she already sees an interesting future for the Jakeward shipping! Yay!

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ruleto May 24 2011, 04:58:13 UTC
Yeah I wanted the beginning to start hot and then get surreal. This is actually the second time I've written something intimate so bear with me lol.

Yes I want to keep Alice has Alice and not mess with her to much. I won't spoil or even hint(just yet) what Alice might be seeing.

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