Watching You, Watching Me, Chapter 4 - Familiar Taste of Poison

[rumielf]

“When did I get all of these things!”

Alice, surrounded by piles of clothing, knickknacks and random items, threw her hands in the air, frustrated. She had less than a week before the Wonder would sail for China and she still had to finish her packing. She fought her way out of the maze of belongings and finally stood by the dresser and mirror. Her

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[anonymous_plume]

Ooh! This um, well, it's very nice. *fans self*

Go get her, Tarrant.

[rumielf]

LOL. Thanks!

[niphuria]

Oh, wow, I finally saw the "leave a comment" sentence! I've already read part one some time ago before you joined the Big Bang and wow, this is one hell of a story!

You write beautifully, erotically, and you capture Alice and Tarrant incredibly well. Their thoughts and feelings are so well articulated that I can feel what they feel. Well, you know what I mean, I hope! ;)

Anyway, I'm glad that Tarrant hasn't given up on her nor she on him!

Fabulous story and fabulous chapter!

[rumielf]

Thanks so much! It was killing me to keep this puppy secret for so long. :)

Aw...shucks...I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy with the compliments. And yeah, I can't imagine Tarrant ever quite giving up on her. :)

[just_a_dram]

Annnd...picking up where we left off how many months ago? :) And hot as ever. Nice to see that the Hatter hasn't given up on her. Although, I wouldn't have expected him to!

[rumielf]

I know! Seems like ages ago! But it was totally worth it. :)

Thanks!!

*laughs* He's a persistent guy. That might be part of why he's so awesome.