:D Fantastic insight once more, how fascinating! I just love the way you portrayed centurion!Rory, and how very different he was from the Rory we know, how he was a leader-which contrasted so sharply with what we saw of him just in your previous chapter. Loved the way he handled the conflicts between his soldiers, he was clearly a good leader, firm but just and making himself respected. I also like that the men were in such a state about the matter of Cleopatra's presence, that was believable but also quite fun ;) And I like the bits of repressed regular-Rory that came to nag at his mind, the impulse to act nice and understanding and want to take care of people, make them better. The sudden onslaught of memories that hearing about the Doctor and Amy triggered was very strikingly portrayed, quite intense, it all just came rushing back to the surface. And the ending was such epic, business-like Rory despite his state of weakness and shock :D Very nice work
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Thank you once again. This is one chapter that just poured out of me. I've always found Roman Rory quite fascinating. I mean ... he's a leader, and that's so not normal for him. So exploring this a bit was fun :)
Oh, and you're right -- that should be people's not peoples' and I misplaced the apostrophe. Thanks. I've fixed it now :)
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Oh, and you're right -- that should be people's not peoples' and I misplaced the apostrophe. Thanks. I've fixed it now :)
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