A Long Life (But One Worth Living): Chapter Twenty Four

[rumpelsnorcack]

Title: A Long Life (But One Worth Living)
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[a_phoenixdragon]

Yeah, unfortunately, the Knights Templar were not a joke. They didn't have anything even remotely like a sense of humor and they were zealots at best.

I'm afraid Rory is in for a rather rough one!!

*Is excited to read it!*

*SQUISHES YOU*

[rumpelsnorcack]

Yeah, this section is totally doing my head in to write. But I love it. time for some menace in Rory's life, methinks :D

[mollywheezy]

I love the changes you made to the chapter. Great job! :)

And I would be afraid of the Knights Templar, too, or anyone else who would attack people for having different beliefs.

[rumpelsnorcack]

Thank you! And, yeah, I think this is going to be a difficult time for Rory - more difficult than the 'prized possession of the Knights Templar' from the episode would suggest :D I'm having fun writing it :D

[flowsoffire]

Ouch, so much for a boring but not too hard duty! Those are something else. I like the way you portrayed Rory's anxiety and uncertainty, his trying his hardest to assess them and figure out what to say and how to behave, and his making himself sound so assured when he really was not. I was also quite interested in the Knights' attitude to him and the Pandorica… and now, now, their interest for him is rather bad omens =P Looking forward to seeing what you'll make of this next! :)

[rumpelsnorcack]

Yeah, poor Rory got a bit too comfortable with the tribes and now he has the problem of facing something quite outside his experience. I'm having fun with this part :)

[flowsoffire]

I can imagine :D Doubtlessly it will be fun to see, too! ;)