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rumpelsnorcack

Fic: To Warm The World

Jul 08, 2015 14:32

Title: To Warm The World
Rating: G
Genre: Gen
Word Count: 487
Pairings or Characters: Wilf, Donna
Summary: From the minute she was born, her red hair flashing out even as she took her first glance of her new world, this child had been the centre of his universe
Notes: Written for the who_contest 'sun' challenge (my first one, yay!). Title taken from John ( Read more... )

fic, who contest, doctor who

Comments 15

a_phoenixdragon July 8 2015, 02:57:26 UTC

Ahhh, lovie...this is a beautiful, BEAUTIFUL fiction. And I will not hear any differently...

*Hugs you fierce and tight*

rumpelsnorcack July 8 2015, 02:59:03 UTC

Thank you. You are always the very best cheerleader :)

*snuggles you back*

paynesgrey July 8 2015, 03:15:02 UTC

Lovely perspective of Donna through Wilf's eyes, especially how he sees her like a sun. Brilliant job!

rumpelsnorcack July 8 2015, 03:36:16 UTC

Thank you! I don't normally write Donna and/or Wilf but this just grabbed me when I saw the prompt.

mollywheezy July 8 2015, 12:00:26 UTC

I love Donna and Wilf! And I ADORE your drabble--such exquisite imagery that is so appropriate for them. :)

rumpelsnorcack July 8 2015, 20:28:58 UTC

Awww, thank you very much. I've never written either character before (or not that I've posted, heh), but this just hit me when I saw the challenge and it demanded to be written.

scripsi July 9 2015, 06:35:54 UTC

This made me cry! so lovely and, which is so unusual with Donna, ending on an optimistic note. I love that her mother is included in the end. Thank you!

rumpelsnorcack July 9 2015, 07:40:57 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! That means a lot :) The one thing that actually made her ending even a little ok to me was Wilf's promise to remember for her, so I had to include it.

scripsi July 9 2015, 09:47:03 UTC

Thank you for writing such lovely fic! And I agree, Wilf's promise makes it a little bit better.

shivver13 July 9 2015, 23:34:35 UTC

Oh, now this was just beautiful! I love the way that you wove the metaphor of suns and galaxies and magnetism around the four characters - especially Sylvia's opposite pole, and the observation that Donna was just same as she'd always been but seemed so much less in comparison. You captured Donna's and Wilf's story so perfectly.

rumpelsnorcack July 10 2015, 01:28:40 UTC

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed taking this little look at Donna. Her story has always hurt me, but I've never managed to articulate my feelings on it before :) It's nice to know that people are enjoying this little take on it.