LJ Idol, Week 2

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Comments

[xreesex]

I really loved this. It was funny, warm, and unexpected. You're great!

Also, I think it's neat that our stories are not really but kind of similar. Hopefully this means we'll be writing our own story well into old age (gag..... that was too cute even for me!). Really good job!!

[rumplebuttkins]

Thanks, love!

Yeah, the similarities in theme are a little weird, all gaggy thoughts aside. I still like your story better though.

[xreesex]

I've trained you well, obviously.

[vik_thor]

»laughs!

[rumplebuttkins]

Thanks! Much appreciated.

[alien_infinity]

That was a cute and amusing story. I loved the ending. :)

[rumplebuttkins]

Thank you!

[alien_infinity]

I wanted to add that I liked how your story had a supernatural element without being creepy.

[rumplebuttkins]

Ha, yeah I had no intention of making the story creepy, so I'm glad that it didn't seem to come off that way for the most part.

[majesticzaichik]

I really loved that imagery you had going with the wind. I also really liked how Elsie used that to communicate with him. Very sweet story.

[rumplebuttkins]

Ha, thanks. when I am dead that will be how I communicate with people.

[rumplebuttkins]

Thanks, very appreciated! It's funny, though, because I didn't even consider it to be a twist when I was writing it...I thought it was pretty obvious.