Anomalous Beauty

[run_remember]

Written for the who_contest

Comments

[a_phoenixdragon]

Ahhh, this is beautiful...well done, lovie. This is truly gorgeous!

*HUGS*

[run_remember]

Oh thank you so very much! Hugs back! <3

[pony_express]

Oh I loved this.
Good luck with the challenge (:

[run_remember]

Thank you very much. New to DW challenges so just happy to take part with such great writers. :)

[pony_express]

You're welcome! Ah, me too! My first time writing was for this prompt! xD I feel you. It's so nice to rub shoulders with the best DW writters! <3

[quirkysmuse]

Very sweet and wonderful thoughts by the Doctor toward Clara. Lovely job.

[run_remember]

Oh thank you so much. :)

[mihnn]

This was simply gorgeous. Simple, yet complex.I love your writing style as well.

[run_remember]

Oh wow, thank you. My writing style is kind of unique, different (at least that's what I've been told, sometimes even takes getting used to), so that means a lot. I'm glad even though this piece was definitely simple, some complexity could show through. That's important to me. Thanks so much. :)

[flowsoffire]

Quite the beautiful story! Your description of Clara, at the beginning, was very moving. I loved how absolutely astonished the Doctor was with her survival, you really showed how very impossible she was. The physical side of this piece was also very powerful, her lying there in his arms, unconscious and vulnerable, her breath brushing against him, the way he touched her in tiny ways, felt the craving to touch even more. I loved the way you described Clara's fearful, but still steady gaze encouraging him, pushing him forwards right before he entered his grave.
Why has this girl taken my pair of hearts and twisted them tightly together?
Beautiful sentence.
Very good work overall =)

[run_remember]

I'm glad that the description helped with the visual story. That was important to me. And your lovely feedback shows me you felt the emotions I was trying to convey. Thank you so much for your detailed feedback.