Comments | run_remember: Unfixed Discovery

run_remember

Unfixed Discovery

Jul 18, 2013 12:55

Written for dw100
( Unfixed Discovery )

doctor: eleven, story: unfixed discovery, type: drabble100, companion: clara oswald

Comments 7

a_phoenixdragon July 18 2013, 21:37:40 UTC

Ohh, beautiful, honey!!

*HUGS*

run_remember July 18 2013, 22:41:25 UTC

Ah, thanks. This was fun! I'm going to have fun writing these little 100 pieces, challenging myself to say more with less.

Hugs you back!*

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run_remember July 20 2013, 05:32:01 UTC

Ah, thanks! Fun write. :)

flowsoffire July 20 2013, 08:17:16 UTC

Oh, this is a really interesting scene! I loved your use of the word unfixed, and Clara's line was just smashing. Wonderful!

run_remember July 21 2013, 07:21:04 UTC

I went back and forth with 'unfixed' actually so I'm glad it worked. I just kind of liked the way it read, a bit different. Ah, Clara's line was fun. Thank you!

honeynoir July 20 2013, 22:27:03 UTC

Oh, so lovely! Determined!Clara and the TARDIS casually passing...

run_remember July 21 2013, 07:22:16 UTC

Yes, just fun to have Clara seeing the TARDIS long before without even realizing. Thank you so much!