(no subject)
Knowledge is something precious
Something dangerous
Something you can learn but not unlearn
I DO realize what u’re hinting wh “Knowledge is something … you can learn but not unlearn”
Indeed.
This is prob my fave chapter. I love you showing their thoughts, and the details! and Flows! My god woman, your description really helps shape up their personalities! Lol at the gold-plated timepiece. So Dunhill!!! XD But I didn’t expect Kaoru to admit so frankly that he’s bisexual. Funny how I wrote a fic b4, and Kaoru was also divorced. Is that how we picture Kaoru?
Anyways, the pencil part, you did it so naturally I thought it was planned even b4 I mentioned it!!! It’s so sweet. I have a few ideas of what Totchi heard. But I might embarrass myself if I tell u so lol I won’t say a word until it is revealed.
I guess it IS sick to do it with ur sibling. You write amazingly, to see how hot it was, and then the conflicted morning after, and here, Totchi’s scene is so cold, where he started to think back and regretted what he’s done. But I don’t see that much regret from the both of them actually!! XDD Because during the sex, they were having thoughts right? At least Kaoru did. They seemed conscious enough to know what they’re doing, but too unconscious to think further.
And it’s so funny that Kaoru said He should know better than to succumb to his lust …. that made me think he knew what’s going on, and lusting for his brother! Seriously is this how we see Kaoru? LMAO and then he even went on!
The feel of Toshiya’s smooth skin under his hands were so real. When he ran his fingers along those long legs, they were cleanly-shaven, silky, much like a woman’s
He compared him wh a woman?! Am I wrong to think Kaoru’s only been wh one woman, his ex wife? If he really regretted his action, he wasn’t even supposed to compare Toshiya wh a woman! It’s his brother!!! OMG Kaoru, to me, in this fic, is baad.
Toshiya’s lips had been soft and wet when he kissed them. It was not a dream, as much as Kaoru kept wishing it was
If it was a dream, it would’ve been worse! Bcuz then he would be curious, and started imagining things, and that’d make him the pervy pedo blackmalice’s Kaoru. XD
These intimate thoughts spurred a strange sensation in Kaoru …. oh dear lord.
Toshiya seems to hate himself for ruining his new life, and Kaoru’s. But I don’t think Kaoru hates himself for doing that. Very narrow minded this guy, he had the time to blame Toshiya. Tsk. LOL when I read he’s in the office, reading documents I was like Buh!! Like he would concentrate XD But great that he decided to talk to Toshiya.
Toshiya also, not finding Kaoru in the apartment, he didn’t know whether he’s disappointed or relieved. They don’t really regret what happened do they? If they have the chance to, they’ll probably do it all over again. Right? Toshiya should stay away from his friends! One evening hanging out wh them, and this happened!
I love the way you describe Toshiya’s leave. The lift’s doors, the disappearing footsteps, it emphasized the emptiness and loneliness in Kaoru’s apartment ;__; Did he just realize how lonely he was before Toshiya’s arrival?
I kinda wished Kaoru would find something else in Toshiya’s room. Maybe some things that would tell him what kind of life Toshiya really had in the US. I think Kaoru thought of his life there as all fun: drugs,/parties. But they happened to conceal Toshiya’s true feelings right? I wish Kaoru would find out.
I love the pencil thing!!! Mukyaa! Toshiya’s still the messy one XD
I wonder what Kaoru meant by ”Toshiya, you really are an idiot…”
But innocence, I was pondering about it last night. I guess none of that is left in their lives, now that they had sex,
Well, that’s all from me this time. My mind a little hanged, and my eyes very dry. I need to sleep now. This comment shucks!!!! But you’re great! *thumbs up*
Oh!!! One thing tho! I WANT DIE/SHINYA scene!!!!! XDDDD Can Die be any hotter? Seriously! He’s so hot!
Something dangerous
Something you can learn but not unlearn
I DO realize what u’re hinting wh “Knowledge is something … you can learn but not unlearn”
Indeed.
This is prob my fave chapter. I love you showing their thoughts, and the details! and Flows! My god woman, your description really helps shape up their personalities! Lol at the gold-plated timepiece. So Dunhill!!! XD But I didn’t expect Kaoru to admit so frankly that he’s bisexual. Funny how I wrote a fic b4, and Kaoru was also divorced. Is that how we picture Kaoru?
Anyways, the pencil part, you did it so naturally I thought it was planned even b4 I mentioned it!!! It’s so sweet. I have a few ideas of what Totchi heard. But I might embarrass myself if I tell u so lol I won’t say a word until it is revealed.
I guess it IS sick to do it with ur sibling. You write amazingly, to see how hot it was, and then the conflicted morning after, and here, Totchi’s scene is so cold, where he started to think back and regretted what he’s done. But I don’t see that much regret from the both of them actually!! XDD Because during the sex, they were having thoughts right? At least Kaoru did. They seemed conscious enough to know what they’re doing, but too unconscious to think further.
And it’s so funny that Kaoru said He should know better than to succumb to his lust …. that made me think he knew what’s going on, and lusting for his brother! Seriously is this how we see Kaoru? LMAO and then he even went on!
The feel of Toshiya’s smooth skin under his hands were so real. When he ran his fingers along those long legs, they were cleanly-shaven, silky, much like a woman’s
He compared him wh a woman?! Am I wrong to think Kaoru’s only been wh one woman, his ex wife? If he really regretted his action, he wasn’t even supposed to compare Toshiya wh a woman! It’s his brother!!! OMG Kaoru, to me, in this fic, is baad.
Toshiya’s lips had been soft and wet when he kissed them. It was not a dream, as much as Kaoru kept wishing it was
If it was a dream, it would’ve been worse! Bcuz then he would be curious, and started imagining things, and that’d make him the pervy pedo blackmalice’s Kaoru. XD
These intimate thoughts spurred a strange sensation in Kaoru …. oh dear lord.
Toshiya seems to hate himself for ruining his new life, and Kaoru’s. But I don’t think Kaoru hates himself for doing that. Very narrow minded this guy, he had the time to blame Toshiya. Tsk. LOL when I read he’s in the office, reading documents I was like Buh!! Like he would concentrate XD But great that he decided to talk to Toshiya.
Toshiya also, not finding Kaoru in the apartment, he didn’t know whether he’s disappointed or relieved. They don’t really regret what happened do they? If they have the chance to, they’ll probably do it all over again. Right? Toshiya should stay away from his friends! One evening hanging out wh them, and this happened!
I love the way you describe Toshiya’s leave. The lift’s doors, the disappearing footsteps, it emphasized the emptiness and loneliness in Kaoru’s apartment ;__; Did he just realize how lonely he was before Toshiya’s arrival?
I kinda wished Kaoru would find something else in Toshiya’s room. Maybe some things that would tell him what kind of life Toshiya really had in the US. I think Kaoru thought of his life there as all fun: drugs,/parties. But they happened to conceal Toshiya’s true feelings right? I wish Kaoru would find out.
I love the pencil thing!!! Mukyaa! Toshiya’s still the messy one XD
I wonder what Kaoru meant by ”Toshiya, you really are an idiot…”
But innocence, I was pondering about it last night. I guess none of that is left in their lives, now that they had sex,
Well, that’s all from me this time. My mind a little hanged, and my eyes very dry. I need to sleep now. This comment shucks!!!! But you’re great! *thumbs up*
Oh!!! One thing tho! I WANT DIE/SHINYA scene!!!!! XDDDD Can Die be any hotter? Seriously! He’s so hot!