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serratedteeth July 19 2013, 00:35:40 UTC
Kyungsoo/Sehun is a new ship for me. There's a gorgeous contrast between the two. Kyungsoo's competence and Sehun's sometimes petulence. Kyungsoo's soft curves and rounded featured next to Sehun's angularity. Just, yes. Oh man, but the heartbreak of the slow dissolve of a relationship when the orbits shift ever so subtley and the gravity that holding things together gradually decays. Guh, let me bask in the melancholy after having read this beautiful gift on this warm late afternoon and think about all the ways it went wron ever so well.

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gollumpanties July 21 2013, 19:08:11 UTC
*stares at poetic comment in mute appreciation* I have no words.

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nadumolla July 19 2013, 08:05:53 UTC
I can't. It's so beautifully written and I'm so broken because I was really hoping for sesoo to pull through it all. It really hurts and it's 1 in the morning right now but it seems I can't stop crying even if I want to. I think I'll really have puffy eyes tomorrow and dammit stupid sudo.

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gollumpanties July 21 2013, 19:08:26 UTC
/pets gently
shhhhhh it okay

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nadumolla July 23 2013, 03:08:08 UTC
But it's just... sobs
I kept thinking about it for days and days and my maeumeun neomu apa. ;;

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gollumpanties July 21 2013, 19:10:36 UTC
I'm almost incapable of not giving ships a happy ending, I think... I put Sehun through hell, so I had to make it right for him. ;;

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loudestoflove July 21 2013, 03:01:52 UTC
wow, this was really nicely written!! i'm not, in general, into fic with infidelity, but i liked how you handled this. the focus was always on sehun, the way that he felt about things and how he tried to work through whether he was just paranoid or if this was really happening. you built up their history really well, with the familiarity in the way they treated each other and the memories sehun associates with their place. his feelings of inadequacy and loneliness felt really genuine too, and petulant sehun struck a really good note. i liked the way that the storms reflected fights with kyungsoo, that was a nice touch!! also i am like 900% pleased that jongin backed the hell off when sehun let him know that he had a boyfriend, but he still wanted to help him. it was such a jongin thing, to really bend over backwards for someone he likes. i'm so glad that sehun walked away, too, because that showed his growth and how he was making the decision for himself, even if that hurt.

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gollumpanties July 21 2013, 19:12:49 UTC
*gurgles* you're a butt and i love you stop making me have feels

Jongin is a good guy. He may not be the quickest on the uptake or the most smooth, but he knows what's up and he ain't gonna be a jerk. u__u
Sehun still has a lot more growing to do, but he's on the right track.

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gollumpanties July 21 2013, 19:13:47 UTC
*sings Gilbert & Sullivan* Take any heart~ take mine~!

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