Place Your Bets for curledupkitten

Jul 17, 2013 19:33

Title: Place Your Bets
For: curledupkitten
Pairing: Sukai
Rating: NC-17
Length: 4k+
Summary: What better way to prove the existence of love than the existence of heartbreak?

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postings, summer 2013

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beastlyshine July 18 2013, 00:03:55 UTC
AW OMG THATS CUTE go suho for being proactive UGH IM TRYING NOT TO FALL FOR SUKAI BUT ITS CLEARLY NOT WORKING

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curledupkitten July 18 2013, 02:35:53 UTC
hi anon! i'll be back!

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curledupkitten July 18 2013, 04:04:23 UTC
okay hi anon!!! ❀ ❀
sukai is my otp!!!
i really love that out of all the options
you chose my ~❤ ❤favorite pairing❤ ❤~ to write about!!!
i think the best part of this fic
was the way joonmyun wanted to teach jongin
to show him what love was
even at the price of his own feelings ;~~;
he's a very idealized character here
and that
in contrast with jongin as a very clear anti-hero
gives them an interesting dynamic
i appreciate joonmyun's position a lot
the pain of being in love with someone who is toxic
can be very demoralizing and painful.
in the end, i found this story to be very bittersweet:
jongin realizes he loves joonmyun, it's true
but on the reverse side of the coin,
he's still an extremely selfish person
who takes a lot and gives very little
maybe love can be a starting point to
an internal change for the better?
i'm rooting for joonmyun to offer him a helping hand,
even if he has to ultimately grow up using his own power!

i really liked a heart that can be broken is also a heart that can know love.it rang very true with the ( ... )

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cactuzoz July 18 2013, 05:27:00 UTC
thank you for this beautiful piece~
my heart constrict painfully for both of them~
what a gorgeous writing style ;A;

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loudestoflove July 19 2013, 12:16:53 UTC
oh, interesting!! i thought you hit a really good note with joonmyun's character, wanting to teach his dongsaeng a lesson for his own good, even if he gets hurt in the process. i liked his determination a lot, and how much he cares about his best friend!! it rang very true with how i see joonmyun

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sparksfly7 July 30 2013, 03:01:14 UTC
oh poor Suho :( I can really see him as the type of person who throws himself in to helping someone he loves, even at the cost of his own heart. I like how you captured that :) and strangely, I can see Kai as the Casanova heartbreaker because of past hurts. I only wish this were a little longer, hehe.

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