Five Month Hunt for itachibana13

[madelyn93]

Title: Five Month Hunt
For: itachibana13
Pairing: Kris-centric; minor Kris/Chanyeol
Rating: PG-13
Length: 7 560
Summary: It's not every Saturday afternoon that a group of hotel owners destroys a tea party to steal an awkward twenty-year-old chaebol with raspberry tea staining his tie. But this isn't just any Saturday afternoon - this is Park Chanyeol's fake

Comments

[loudestoflove]

there is so much i liked about this fic, wow. i love how distinctive the style is, and how that extends to each character. sehun and jongin functioning as one, all of jongdae's invention titles completely written in Capital Letters, but especially the concisely detailed way that kris thinks about things (his description of the . starting with the firefight and then rewinding to show the build up was really effective as well, as is kris' detachment throughout it all (baekhyun noting which parts of the party will be easiest to demolish was perfect). i just wish there was more!! i want to know kris' motivations and the history behind how he collected his crew on a floor that doesn't exist, and the whole mutant thing too.

[horrours]

thank you so much, i'm so glad all those things worked ; u; it makes me very happy to hear.

yes, i wish i could've had a bit more backstory in there to flesh it out. i feel like it might've been more effective that way. ;;; and tbh i really like your suggestions for it, so i will keep those in mind.

thank you for reading! ♡

[loudestoflove]

i really hope you didn't take it as criticism!! i really, really enjoyed this fic and it was one of my favs in the exchange. but i liked it so much i wanted more!! and as a reader, that's what i wanted, that's all. it was such a fun fic!!

[horrours]

don't worry bb! i didn't think of it that way at all.

sghajskg that's such a compliment to me ; ; thank you so much! ♡

[horrours]

tbh, i was kind of wondering what the rest of the universe would be like too. it's something i'll keep in mind.

thank you so much for reading! ♡

[madelyn93]

your style is so distinct and certainly a breath of fresh air! i love your subtle humour and your matter-of-fact way of writing. there's that hint of a second person view, like we can see right into the characters' heads, and oh, they're all so quirky and yet still them.
i am your fan, author-nim *^*

[horrours]

I AM YOUR FAN TOO JQ SENPAI

sobs at "distinct style" i will never live down my denial

crawls into your arms to nuzzle your face bc thank you ; ; ♡

[itachibana13]

SORRY THIS COMMENT WAS SO LATE OTL BUT OKAY HERE GOES LIVE COMMENTARY

Kris's idea of a good time isn't having a shoot-out at a fancy garden tea party at 3PM on a Saturday afternoon, but he supposes it's close enough.

it's my idea of a good time iM EXCITED ALREADY

this is so action packed already and its so good marry me writer-nim

"Didn't anyone tell you to never bring a knife to a gunfight?"

"Not that guy," says Minseok, and points to some corrupt second-generation chaebol right next to Kris's foot.

IM CRYING P L S minseok is the best so far omg

okay i'm like 1/3 way through this fic and i"M??? SO?/? IN LOVE???????? THAT I FEEL LIKE I JUST WANT TO QUOTE EVERYTHING?????? AND QUOTING 7.5K OF WORDS YOU WROTE RIGHT BACK AT YOU IS PROBABLY AN AWFUL IDEA AND YOU MIGHT HATE ME FOR IT?????????? BUT KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU FOR THIS.

And this is when a frighteningly thick stapled stack of paper printouts comes falling from the sky and nearly breaks Kris's nose.i literally just said i wouldn't quote but this may be in fact my most

[horrours]

wriggles into your arms and trembles ; ;

omg you don't even know how relieved i am that you liked it. i was really so worried bc i didn't think i could do well at the genres you wanted, but i really really wanted to give you a good gift, so i'm happy it worked ; u;

shrieks and rolls around in a mixture of tears and praise

wow omg it's so great to hear that this was perfect for you i am amazed thank you so much ; ; !! the flailing and quoting makes me want to wiggle into a hole to cry in joy ; ; holds tightly to

the fic is in love with you too ok

at first i was so afraid to try something like this, but i think deep down i've really been wanting to write something like this for a while and i just didn't know it. it certainly got me to step out of my comfort zone.

thus I AM HAPPY YOU'RE HAPPY. THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME SUCH A REQUEST AND LIKING THE RESULT OF IT.

wriggles out of your arms, slides the requested wedding ring onto your finger and slinks away

[itachibana13]

ahhh THIS IS PERFECTLY MY GENRE THO LMAO i was reading it like how does she know how much i love action-y things

i'm glad it got you to try something out of your comfort zones!!!! now you can conquer and save more princesses in other castles.

floats away to our honeymoon ;~~~~~~~;

[horrours]

for some reason i just ~sensed~ that the "action" part of the request was VERY IMPORTANT idk maybe psychic connection

SAVING PRINCESSES IS WHAT I DO BEST

has honeymoon in kris's hotel. is beautiful

[chryzeis]

HOLY SHIT THIS WAS SO SO SOOO GOOD!

I don't know how to describe how your writing brings forth such clear images in my mind's eye. The little details and just the way Kris describes things that are happening in a concise yet somewhat detached manner. The last scene was so chilling. It's like a cannibal appreciating his victim before he consumes him. too much hannibal lol

I want reveals now so I can devour the rest of your fics. *_*

[horrours]

omg yes that's totally what i was going for in the last scene tbh

my other fics are pretty different but you can find them here if you want ;;;

i'm so glad you liked it ajshdjskdf ; ; thank you for reading!! ♡