What If I Fell To The Floor? Chapter 1.

Nov 27, 2010 01:10

Title: What If I Fell To The Floor; Couldn't Take This Anymore?
Author: runawaycharis
Pairing: Frank/Gerard AU
Rating: NC17
Warning: Violence, non-consensual sex, cutting, adult themes, language, sex, OMC/OFC death, etc.
Disclaimer: I don't own them, and if I did, I'd be doing far more productive things than writing about them.
Summary: The past six years of ( Read more... )

nc-17, my chemical romance, frerard, mcr, frank/gerard

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enimsaj_2 December 7 2010, 02:05:20 UTC
i think my heart just shattered O.O
That was really good, but so... heartbreaking.
Was it as painful to write as it was to read? And.. will there be more?

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runawaycharis December 10 2010, 00:04:35 UTC
Wow, um, thank you so fucking much, I wasn't really expecting anyone to read it :3
It wasn't too bad actually, but there were moments in writing where I was like, 'I can't believe I'm doing this to Frank!'
I've written most of the next chapter, and I intend to post it at some point :)
I'm going to try and write the whole thing, but:
a) I've not written in a long time, and my confidence is pretty low.
b) It's intended to be quite long, so might take so time.
c) This is arguably my most important year of school, so my updates might be sparse.

But thank you so much for the comment :) xo

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enimsaj_2 December 10 2010, 03:40:20 UTC
well, school should come first. this is my most important year as well so i know what you mean. and even if it takes forever i'll keep on reading this (if you don't mind lol) because it's really good. but when you have the time you should definitely continue. You're a good writer :)

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runawaycharis December 10 2010, 07:38:38 UTC
I don't mind at all :)
Thank you so much :D <3

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kolette_killer December 10 2010, 03:13:03 UTC
Poor Frank!
Don't kill him...!

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runawaycharis December 10 2010, 07:39:11 UTC
I know, I feel terrible. I'm so harsh to them :3

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decadentsuicide December 10 2010, 05:57:55 UTC
Wow.This was absolutely beautiful, yet absolutely terrible at the same time.

I love the way your describe the scene through his eyes and how intense everything is. And the last line was absolutely perfect. I hope you continue because this is amazingly written and I would really like to see where this goes.

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runawaycharis December 10 2010, 07:40:43 UTC
Wow, thank you so, so much.
I'm going to try to finish it, but it'll take me a while.
The next chapter is mostly written, so I'll post it soon hopefully. Probably not tonight because I'm out, but hopefully over the weekend :)

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runawaycharis December 10 2010, 16:02:54 UTC
Heh, me too :3
Thank you :') & I will hopefully over the weekend :D

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awake_not_alive December 11 2010, 23:34:32 UTC
I can not wait to read more of this! Everything was described so well and with such emotion through franks eyes. It made my heat ache for him. I Understand that your work comes first but as long as it takes i will read on cos i'm already capivated. :)

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runawaycharis December 12 2010, 13:24:29 UTC
Thanks :D
I've written chapter 2 and it's with my lovely beta, but there's some things I'm not sure of. But my Christmas holidays begin in less than a week so hopefully I'll be able to write faster over the holidays :)

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