the work we put into this ...!

[runcible]

You guys, since I rolled out of bed I've been working on this. Okay, scratch THAT, I've been working on this project since MARCH. I finished the overall artwork last night and all the time I've been awake (about 8 hours) I've been working on the website, finishing up the art, discussing things with the wonderful author mattador and now -- NOW -- this is

Comments

[cinnamon_sakaki]

Ooh, I really like it so far! It's very smooth and slick, so much better than so many people's first pieces too. I'm already hooked!

[pandorasblog]

I really dug this, particularly, "You're a little paranoid." It seems like there's scope for it to go a lot of interesting places,and I'm going to enjoy following it. You should make an RSS feed or something; anyone can add those to LJ's list of feeds, and it'd help to disseminate it among people who'd enjoy it.

[terrie]

I LIKE IT. :O It's very very good, the panels have a nice flow, the characters are drawn consistently, the dialogue/monologue is well-written, YAY!

I am going to make a tiny critique now: I would suggest you try to keep the text as consistently-sized as possible, unless you're changing it for emphasis. BUT THAT MIGHT JUST BE MY PREFERENCE.