fic: my objective

[runcible]

Lol lol fic. I never write fic this short, but I had to, I needed to get this out. I am never one of those "needed to get this out" writers, but I did. I AM NEVER A LOT OF THINGS. Pls to be reading and feedbacking. No fair if no one does X(

My Objective
600ish words, Brock/Molotov, PG-13

Tonight your ghost will ask my ghost

Comments

[eonism]

Brilliant. Just...gah.

You'd have everything you'd want, she said. She knows what he wants and he knows what to do to get it. It's standing right in front of him, wearing a frown, sweating slightly on her nose, a finger stroking the barrel of her gun on instinct.

The language/tone overall was excellent, but I love this image in particular.

[runcible]

:"> Thank you so much! I was hoping it wasn't too uh, rushed or short. :D

(I used to like either intentionally short drabbles or fics over 2,000 words.)

[dropsofviolet]

Wow, that's powerful! I've never read any VB fic before (just watched the series), but you make me want to seek some out. I love the dynamics of their relationship here...

[runcible]

If you want some good stuff, check out supersciencefic (VB het & gen, I mod it LOL but other people post there too!) and deathmance, which is modded by two of my friends and caters to Molotov/Brock. :DDD

[dropsofviolet]

Ooh, thanks for the link!

*must... find... VB... icon*

[runcible]

ALSO, THANK YOU. XD

[terrie]

WHY IS THIS NOT IN THE DEATHMANCE? >O

[runcible]

I WAS JUST ABOUT TO POST IT, RIGHT AS I GOT THIS COMMENT :D