The Darkness in Their Eyes (part 1 / ?)

Jul 05, 2008 23:51


Name:  The Darkness in Their Eyes (part 1 / ?)
Fandom:  Noir
Pairing:  Mirelle / Kirika  (KiMi) xD
Rating:  Between 15 and +18, for violence and (in later chapters) sex
Spoilers:  Pretty much the whole Noir series

Summary:  After the insanity of the Manor, Mirelle and Kirika are finally beginning to put their lives back together again.  But nothing is ( Read more... )

noir, fic, the darkness in their eyes, femslash, f/f

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steppenwolf_20 July 6 2008, 18:56:09 UTC
Oh great!!!! I love NOIR! and this is really a nice start, summing up what happened before and where they are now!
I'm really looking forward to this
(I think I might have to rewatch the whole series *g*)

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runetraverse July 6 2008, 18:59:07 UTC
Yes, rewatch! All must love Noir! *snicker* It's the one anime I can cheerfully say I'm addicted to. Plus, it's my femslash fix, since Deux doesn't have any.

Oooo, and if you do, check out the eyestyles. It's fun!

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steppenwolf_20 July 6 2008, 19:09:55 UTC
I most certainly will! I remember the eye thing on Kirika, but never noticed on Mirelle!

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steppenwolf_20 July 6 2008, 20:13:26 UTC
Hey, just a thought!
Any chance you can point me to some great Noir femslash?
I'm usually not into Anime (NOIR is the one bis exception) , so Anime communities kinda freak me out *g*

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lucyq602 July 8 2008, 02:44:06 UTC
OOOh , I cant read this, i just found the dvd's at film is truth.

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runetraverse July 8 2008, 04:15:56 UTC
Cheater! xDDD You should have asked me - Jordy and Zach both know I have all seven. And wallscrolls, and playing cards, and trading cards, and posters . . .

Well, too damned much fangirlie stuff, that's for sure. I'm very, very badly addicted. *snicker* Watch quick, damnit. And you'll have to see Deux when it comes out this month, that'll be awesome.

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tudinous July 8 2008, 18:54:02 UTC
Sooo looking forward to the rest of your story

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runetraverse July 9 2008, 04:06:10 UTC
*grin* Thanks. It shall come soon, I promise.

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leet911 July 9 2008, 03:05:23 UTC
Hi!

There was a post with a Noir icon over at passion_perfect, and I thought I was seeing things. I haven't thought about Noir in a pretty long time now, but reading this brought it all back. I don't have much to say about the writing yet, because honestly, nothing really happened in this part. Which, if I may be a little critical, was a little wordy. I'm not judging yet though, because it's not finished and it still might blow me away.

You're screen name sounds familiar, and I think I recognize it from either fanfiction.net or shoujo-ai.com (maybe both?) back when I was active in the Noir stuff. I'm kind of curious though, what's this "Deux Retour" that was mentioned. A Noir sequel? I don't really hang out it in the Noir/anime/shoujoai places anymore, so it's news to me.

I also note the Garcia icon, and must conclude that you're a Criminal Minds fan as well. Emily/JJ I suppose? Hmm... Noir/CM cross-over... Beautiful French assassins, meet the BAU team. I'll stop now...

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runetraverse July 9 2008, 04:16:11 UTC
Be as critical as you wish - I know I have a bit of a problem with over-wording, and it's helpful to have someone give you a kick every now and then. ^^ And yup, I was - and still technically am - on fanfiction.net under the same name. The original version of Darkness is posted there up to the eleventh chapter or so, along with summaries of the sequels to it.

And Deux is - well, the simple explanation is that it's a webcomic. The full name is Noir: le Deux Retour. It's meant to be a pure sequel to the original series (which, sadly, means no femslash). If you've ever seen the list of questions the creators deliberately didn't answer, it's basically my take on those, dealing mostly with Kirika and Chloe's backstories and the inner workings of Soldats. ^^

As for a Noir / CM crossover - ha! The fifth and final piece of the series isn't posted on fanfic, but that's exactly what it is. And it's the only one that has a usual femslash pairing in it, aside from Mirelle and Kirika. xD So bonus points to you for having the same

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breaktherules10 August 28 2008, 00:12:43 UTC
I'd give my left arm to be able to write as well as you do. You are so talented, you truly are.

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runetraverse August 28 2008, 00:43:53 UTC
Awwwww. *snugs* M'dear, you don't do yourself justice - I've seen your stuff too, remember?

Oh! And that reminds me. Wanna be a reader / reviewer for some actual femslash books? *glee-dance*

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breaktherules10 August 28 2008, 01:21:21 UTC
Thank you, but I'm a rank amateur compared to you.And heck yeah, I wanna be a reader/reviewer for some femslash books!! I eagerly await more details! ^_^

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