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runic_binary

Mar 10, 2011 20:06

Title: Beat Down, Lift Up
Fandom: Young Justice
Characters/Pairing: Artemis, Robin
Rating: PG
Word Count: 585
Summary: Weak unworthy replaceable, she beats herself up to a rhythm.
A/N: For a prompt on yj_anon_meme. Artemis pushes herself too hard; Robin notices and confronts her.

( Look, I think I know what you’re going through, but if you’re gonna be a moron about it, at least let me spot you. )

Comments 6

a_big_apple March 11 2011, 01:14:27 UTC

XD Robin's a smart kid. This is great.

runic_binary March 11 2011, 02:17:31 UTC

Somebody has to be the smart one.

Thanks!

elenorasweet March 11 2011, 12:46:55 UTC

The rhythm in this is amazing, the use of repetition. Good job!!

runic_binary March 12 2011, 23:38:18 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

mapping_stars March 11 2011, 15:20:40 UTC

This is fantastic, I love Robin's dialogue and Artemis' train of thought, and everything is just in-character and awesome!

runic_binary March 12 2011, 23:37:50 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad to hear it. :)