Comments | runthegamut: Time Will Turn and Tell (Part 3) || Patrick/Mikey || NC-17

runthegamut

Time Will Turn and Tell (Part 3) || Patrick/Mikey || NC-17

Nov 22, 2009 19:15

Part 2

Patrick didn’t hear from Mikey that night, or the next, or the next. He didn’t get a call or a text message or an email. He took it as a sign that things were really over and that Mikey was moving on ( Read more... )

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nosebleed_seats November 26 2009, 09:37:26 UTC

I'm so glad I decided to stay up late reading this one. It was absolutely fantastic! So well-written and it felt very real. Loved your characterizations. :]

runthegamut November 27 2009, 08:34:11 UTC

I'm glad you decided to stay up and give it a chance as well. Thank you so much for the comment. :)

devilswhore_x November 26 2009, 11:55:14 UTC

HI. I LOVE YOU. AND THIS. THE END ♥

Also, you should totally post your fic on rarebandom :D

runthegamut November 27 2009, 08:36:30 UTC

Thank you! No one else really writes this pairing, so it's nice to know other people enjoy reading it.

I will do that! ♥

untelling November 27 2009, 04:04:43 UTC

I was ready to smack Gabriel at one point (actually, maybe 2 or 3 times) during this, but managed to find myself liking Brendon. How do you do that? :P

Anyway - it was, as always, an awesome story. Loved it. Loved the characterization of everybody. Great ending!

runthegamut November 27 2009, 08:41:08 UTC

Heh. Gabe really wasn't so much of a bad guy as horribly misunderstood by a very jealous (and insecure) Patrick. I'm really glad you liked Brendon because I've never written him before and I wanted him likable but not so much so that the reader would rather see Patrick with him than Mikey. Thank you for taking the time to comment on this and let me know what you thought. I really appreciate it. ♥

Oh, wow dmoonstone December 1 2009, 05:30:44 UTC

You nearly broke my heart with the whole cliche, "Maybe we should see other people." I mean, you made me love Mikey and Patrick together, but you break them up? And then the whole possible Brendon/Patrick.
Oh, my god, I loved it all so much! Very nice, well writen, and just...everything. Wow.

(Sorry if that was terribly ineloquent, but yeah.)

Re: Oh, wow runthegamut December 2 2009, 05:20:45 UTC

Thank you so much. It was really hard to break them up, actually, even if they are fictional. That being said, I was surprised by how much I liked Brendon and Patrick together. It doesn't work out for them here, but next time...

I really appreciate the feedback, even if you don't think it was eloquent. Just knowing that you read it all and took the time to say it effected you and you liked it means a lot. :D

zombierocker21 January 20 2010, 06:43:57 UTC

Wow!!!

OMB! It was so sad when I thought that Mikey had finally slept with Gabe that I really almost cried.

You are a great writer, but an evil girl. hahaha