Eureka!

Sep 15, 2011 15:19


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nowgoesquickly September 17 2011, 04:30:59 UTC
This whole post makes a lot of sense. Using "he saw" puts the reader in the position of observing the character making observations instead of just making said observations along with him.

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ruthannereid September 17 2011, 04:34:29 UTC
Yes! Someone on my blog just called them "filter words."

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