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Round 3, Challenge 9: Voting

May 28, 2010 08:54

Below the cuts are the drabbles and poll for Round 3, Challenge 9 of rwhg_ldws

• Please mark the drabbles out of 10 using the poll below.
• If you are taking part, please do not vote for your own drabble.
• Please mark ALL of the drabbles. If you don't, none of your scores will count.
• The order of the drabbles random.

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challenge 9, round: 3, challenge: voting

Comments 5

willow_wand May 28 2010, 15:29:46 UTC

#1-- I thought what Harry said was so sweet. Who better to toast their relationship than the person who watched them fall in love!

#2--I really enjoyed how you used the senses to describe the aftermath of the war. I loved the section where Lavender throws herself at Hermione.

#3--I loved how you used the prompt here, and how well you capture Ron's cluelessness about what he's feeling and their insecurities of how the other feels. Truly lovely drabble!

#4-- You took a big risk here, but I think it paid off. This is a wonderful drabble. You captured the prompt so well and really managed to use the senses to create an emotional response. Excellent work!

pili204 May 28 2010, 17:08:41 UTC

Wow, these are all great.

I love the emotion behind #1 - who better to talk about their journey than Harry. What a wonderful toast.

I like the format (and beginning of every section) of number #2, the passing of time and of different experiences after the battle was nicely done.

Number 3 was absolutely WONDERFUL. The voices are perfect and growing attention and sense each other has of the other speaks volumes of their feelings.

Number 5 was oh, so angsty but so well executed. It made me shiver from the emotion.

maybe1ce May 28 2010, 18:14:31 UTC

Wow. Congratulations to all of us, here. I'm so excited to read these...and I do so love all three of you and adore your work, so I'm kind of at a loss to follow the voting!

urbanmama1 May 29 2010, 03:44:00 UTC

This is a fantastic round. All of the authors made wonderful use of the prompt, and they ranged from funny to heartbreaking. Well done, everyone!

loonynamelass August 30 2010, 00:12:10 UTC

#2 blew me away. Just... everything. The circles.

Luna's part is so sad, too- "None of it is real."

"He ignored the salt on his lips as he sunk into a stupor, a merciful sleep.
Six years after, Ron's arm tingled as he held his surprisingly heavy godson."

I couldn't quite catch the transition here. It could just be the salt tingling in Lucius' mouth...

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And #3 was also excellent, though awfully tragic.