Below the cuts are the drabbles and poll for Round 3, Challenge 10 of
rwhg_ldws • Please mark the drabbles out of 10 using the poll below.
• Participants are no longer allowed to vote.
• Please mark ALL of the drabbles. If you don't, none of your scores will count.
• The order of the drabbles random.
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Drabble 2 - Poor Ron. I feel bad for laughing. I think Ron's voice was perfect here. I can only think that Muggles have never been locked up in a dungeon while the love of their life is tortured by Death eaters, or seen their best mate's lifeless body being carried out of a forest. Perfect line.
Drabble 3 - I love how you used the image of the wedding band throughout the drabble to show the cycle of things. I also really liked Harry giving Hermione away. And the last few lines with a pregnant Rose made me cry.
Good job all three of you!
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8 to the first drabble;
9 to the second drabble;
10 to the third drabble.
I know this might sound random, but it's the way I liked them. It was garder between the second and the third one, because the second cracked me up! But the last one almost makes me cry about Hermione's dad and Ron's mom's deaths.
Great work!
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