Fic Request Fulfilled for oddsbobs

[lissomelle]

Title: Weasley's Theory of Evolution
Author: roonil_wazlib80
Beta: ice_fairy13
Rating: R
Word count: 3,720
Summary: When the search for the perfect Valentine's Day gift goes awry, Ron fears that Hermione will realize that maybe the "emotional capacity of a teaspoon" was a gross overestimation. Post-war.
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is not mine!
Author's Notes:

Comments

[hpuckle]

This was just lovely! I ♥ Ron so much, he is so adorable!

xxx

[oddsbobs]

oooooo that was so incredibly LOVELY! ♥ ♥ ♥

You wrote Ron exactly how I see him, and there's such wonderful little bits of humor, and a hawt little snippet of smuttiness, and... and.. GUH. Just so perfect!

(And Harry's cameo and 'zebra' remark... so awkwardly corny! I loved it! I say stupid stuff like that all the time!)

Thank you sooooo much for this. It exceeded any possible expectation I may have had, and completely blew me away.

[admiral_sab]

This was really good. :) Ron's so adorable and sweet, gotta love that!

[kerosinkanister]

Really nice fic! Your Ron was spot-on and Hermione was absolutely adorable.

I loved this line: He froze, afraid that too sudden a movement might scare off this skittish creature, and Ron knew he'd rather have it stay than go.

And Ron's thoughts on cold-footed girls was great as well, and the slippers were a nice touch.

[luvscharlie]

That was precious, though I must say the build up in the tent left a little UST. I was like "No, don't wake up." Great, great story, and perfectly characterized Ron and Hermione. Brilliant~~ Now, I'm headed back to that tent.

And I agree w/ keroinkanister about the favorite line, it made me snicker out loud and say ah all at the same time.