Fic Request Fulfilled for manda_lalala

Jun 14, 2008 23:00

Title: Forward Motion
Author: greysgurl
Beta: jamyg98, threwyoureyes
Rating: G
Word count: 1682
Summary: Their lives were moving so fast, and all they could do was to hold on tight.
Warnings: --
Notes: --

Forward Motion )

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manda_lalala June 15 2008, 05:14:43 UTC
That was adorable. It was perfect and sweat and fluffy... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!

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manda_lalala June 15 2008, 05:15:02 UTC
sweet* lol

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greysgurl June 15 2008, 07:04:06 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, it took a lot of time to write! Thankyou for such a sweet comment.

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i_am_girlfriday June 15 2008, 06:17:24 UTC
This is so sweet! I like how you described Ron as sometimes being off in a distant time... :)

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greysgurl June 15 2008, 07:05:17 UTC
Thankyou! In my head, Ron's kind of broody, plus I cling onto hope that some men have emotions and the Ron in my head is my scapegoat for that!

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slam_girl June 15 2008, 07:43:37 UTC
I like this broody Ron, you really made it work. And I love his initial proposal line--that was so Ron. Very sweet and lovely fic.

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lire_casander June 15 2008, 11:03:27 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwww, this was perfect!

Ron was his usual self, clumsy and insecure - though he managed a great spell to open the gates yet he screwed the rose part, turning it into a lilac. And though the proposal wasn't perfect, the feeling of knowing each other, of being so perfect together, was what made this work.

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hpuckle June 16 2008, 00:38:49 UTC
So sweet, I adore Ron so much here. He's perfectly him!

xxx

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