Fic Request Fulfilled for butterfly_kate

[lissomelle]

Title: A Perfect Vacation
Author: Margot/midnight_birth.
Beta: Patrick
Rating: R
Word count: 7,042
Warnings: Fluff. Themes of sexual nature. Mischievous whale.

Summary: Ron and Hermione go on a summer holiday with a very young Rose, but they swiftly discover the difficulties of doing so. Tensions run high and the vacation threatens to become a disaster, but an

Comments

[drcjsnider]

ah... so sweet. This was a wonderful read.

[midnight_birth]

Thank you so much!! :) I'm so glad you liked it!

[hpuckle]

This was realistic, beautiful, perfect... wonderfully Ron/Hermione!

xxx

[midnight_birth]

Thanks a ton!! :D

[slam_girl]

That was just so sweet and charming and realistic. There were some humorous and touching moments from them trying to balance their family life with all the other aspects of their lives . I liked the detail you put into this with the whales--whales are awesome, btw.

And now I can't help but wonder if the Weasleys may have used a few sleeping spells on their kids when they were being fussy. I think quite a few parents might take advantage of that :p

[midnight_birth]

Thank you so much!!!

I know I would. I mean, if they're harmless, why not? :P

[i_am_girlfriday]

Sweeeeet! This felt so realistic. I felt miserable with them and I felt happy for them in the end. This is a great look at what family life would be like for Ron and Hermione :)

[midnight_birth]

Thank you so much!! :D

[butterfly_kate]

Wow. Wow wow wow.

Okay, coherence:

They had eyes for no one but each other, but as of late, it seemed to them, sex was put on the back burner, to be replaced by more urgent things - work, and Rose with her lengthy and difficult chicken pox, to only name a few. They were up all night with Rose and sleep-walking through their jobs during the day, hardly able to remember their own names by the time bedtime rolled around.

I love how this is really simple but so visual at the same time. It really makes me feel for the two of them!

Hermione expected their trip to go flawlessly.

Lol! Famous last words eh?!

After the seventeen-hour flight, Hermione was prepared to rip her hair out, and could see that Ron looked exhausted and desperate. She did not take into consideration how long the flight from London to Hawaii would be, and how a small child might react to sitting in a seat for almost a day in the air. She could see that Ron barely got through it. His fascination of looking out the window at the clouds waned sooner than she thought

[midnight_birth]

Thank you so much!! Your comment literally made my day!! I wanted you of all people to like it, and I'm more than happy to find out that you did!! :D