Fic Request Fulfilled for cyyt

[lissomelle]

Title: A Little too Perfect
Author: admiral_sab
Beta: jamyg98
Rating: PG (just to be on the safe side)
Word count: 1366
Summary: Hermione and Ron are on a picnic and things are a little too perfect for Hermione.
Warnings: none
Notes: I hope my requester likes this and it's the right level of sweet. ;) Thanks to my beta for helping me take it to the next level.

Comments

[slam_girl]

That was cute and an interesting take on Ron and Hermione's relationship post-war. I wouldn't want them to stop bickering either! It's definitely got it's place. Very nice. :)

[admiral_sab]

Thanks for the kind review. :) I'm glad you liked it!

[i_am_girlfriday]

They were Ron and Hermione on a picnic, in the spring, with the rain starting to fall, and tension mounting. It was a really good day.

For me the tension is key. Very nicely done!

[admiral_sab]

Me too! Thanks!

[cyyt]

It was so cute! I loved the part where they started fighting. Also, the repetition for"Honestly, Ronald" and the "Honestly, Hermione" was good.(: I liked the way you interpreted the prompt too, very original. I don't think I've read a fic like this before(: Thanks for writing this!(:

[admiral_sab]

YAY you liked it, I'm so glad. I was worried about this one because it's hard to know what the requestor has in mind when requesting a fic. ;)

Anyway, thanks!

[dransinha77]

Ron and Hermione being Ron and Hermione!
Lovely fic! :)

[admiral_sab]

;) And we wouldn't have them any other way right? LOL Thanks

[lire_casander]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww