Fic Request Fulfilled for franlock

[lissomelle]

Title: The Sanity In Your Laughter
Author: Lire Casander lire_casander
Beta: Lovely B. Any mistakes left are my own.
Rating: PG
Word count: 2100
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe - all recognisable characters and settings are the property of J. K. Rowling and her associates. No copyright infringement is intended. No

Comments

[drcjsnider]

oh... I like how you speculate about how Ron and Hermione would survive/get through the days after the war

[lire_casander]

Thanks! I always wonder about how they finally got over the war together, and this was just screaming to be written!

[franlock]

Aw, that was really cute! I liked it how there was some tension before they finally got together - It made it a lot more realistic. I really liked the characterization of Hermione in particular. Overall, you did a job well done! Thank you so much!

[lire_casander]

Thank you very much for your words! I always aim for realistic characterizations, sometimes they're dead on, and sometimes they slide... I'm glad you liked this!

[howcanthatbe]

that was really well done. I love how you carry the sobriety through the story. It is a nice counterpoint to the sort of dizzy Room of Requirement scene in DH. The laughter line--so sweet, too.

[lire_casander]

You see, I never liked the way JK wrote that scene, it was so rushed and not explained... Thanks for reading and commenting!

[i_am_girlfriday]

I really loved this bit, "Four days late and honestly sorry, Hermione, but I'm here," he said, turning her around to face him. "I should have come with you in the first place."

I do think that sums them up nicely. Very well done.

[lire_casander]

Their relationship is always taking false steps, so i thought it could be great to show how they started everything...

Thanks!

[dransinha77]

"There's something about your laughter that makes it easy to love, worth to treasure, and impossible to forget."
Very sweet! :)

[lire_casander]

Thanks!