Fic Written For the Exchange

[lissomelle]

Title:To Marry or Not to Marry
Author: cyyt
Beta: Kiley and Jamy
Rating: G
Word count: 1,836
Summary: Ron’s proposal just swept Hermione off her feet. Yet as the wedding draws nearer, Hermione can’t help but to rethink if she should have accepted his proposal.
Warnings: None
Notes: I’m sorry that the line you wanted was slightly changed. I hope that it

Comments

[midnight_birth]

I really liked this fic! I think you got the characterizations right on - Hermione being always punctual and overworking herself, and Ron being a little all over the place, but still the loving, caring Ron.

It was such a sweet story!! Things like that are not always smooth-going, especially for those two, but they finally found happiness!! :D

On to favorite lines!

Hermione sighed at the memory, and each time she thought of it, she knew why she had agreed. He was just… Ron. Sweet and awkward Ron, always trying to place her before anything else, whom she loved with every ounce of her being. --> This line is ridiculously sweet. He doesn't have to be perfect. He's just Ron, exactly as he is. :D

It had always been her dream to have a wedding in April, with the scent of thyme engulfing her, surrounded by a carpet of yellow daffodils. --> Very eloquent line!! Beautiful image!

Though her son Bill and Fleur had been married for five years, sometimes she secretly still felt like strangling her daughter-in-law. --> *giggles* I understand