Drifting

[jazzyjello]

Title: Drifting
Author: jazzyjello
Disclaimer: None of this belongs to me. I'm not making a profit.
Challenge: First kiss.
Summary: Luna had always paid attention to Ron. She doesn't know what to do when he starts looking back.
Rating: PG
Author Notes: Thanks to grimmy23 for the speedy beta.
Warnings: Fluff, fluff and more FLUFF.

Comments

[fudebusho]

Wonderful! Very well done.

[jazzyjello]

Thanks! :)

[infinitegraces]

Oh.

This makes me think of the RPG I was in, Burned on GreatestJournal...I played Luna there, and ever since that, I've always thought my Burned!Luna was perfect. You know, the epitome of Luna-ness?

Yours is the same way, I think. And your Ron...well, let's just say I <3 him.

[jazzyjello]

Thanks! Glad I got Luna right. And I love flustered!blushing!Ron. :)

[infinitegraces]

And I love flustered!blushing!Ron. :)

Yeah, me too.

[kimmy_77]

That was wonderful! I love how you showed that Ron does have a soft side and is even a bit protective of Luna. You wrote both of them perfectly. So good!

[jazzyjello]

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it.

[netbyrd]

Wow... this was one of the best characterizations of Luna from her perspective that I've ever seen! Very nicely done! You have her thought patterns down so wonderfully, so what she blurts out makes complete sense to her and us, but confounds the other people around her. I also love how you have Ron interact with her. Great job!

[jazzyjello]

Thank you! It was fun imagining the mind of Luna. :)

And also thanks for the recc on your LJ. It made my week! *glows*

[didi75]

I really really enjoyed your fic. It was lovely and so refreshingly honest. I loved Luna's thoughts, her fears, her alienation, and especially her feelings toward Ron. It was sad, but so good.

Excellent work! :D

[jazzyjello]

Thanks so much! :)