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ryanbrendonlove

Choking On Your Alibis

Aug 22, 2010 00:39

Title: Choking On Your Alibis
Author: Star (ryanbrendonlove)
Pairings: Sherlock/John (John/Sarah)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 780
Disclaimer/notes: Not mine; property of ACD, BBC, Moff and Gatiss. Inspired by and based on 'Mr Brightside' by The Killers.

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chiroro August 22 2010, 00:17:24 UTC

Aw, that was sweet!

ryanbrendonlove August 22 2010, 16:04:45 UTC

Thank you :)

coldlikedeath August 22 2010, 01:09:25 UTC

This made me a bit sad; I can identify with Sherlock, so much (never thought I'd say that...), but yeah... and we know Sherlock, even though a lot of the time he does not show it, he will always need John. Better for John to be there as a friend and perhaps more to guide him, than Sherlock being alone. Perhaps Sherlock has realised he works better with a colleague/partner/friend.

And listen to me going on like they're real people...

ryanbrendonlove August 22 2010, 16:08:02 UTC

In my brain it's happily ever after and Sherlock and John are whatever it is they are with no one else. Yet this turned out really sad, and I don't quite know why.

Omg, tell me about it!

autumnatmidnite August 22 2010, 06:14:46 UTC

This was so bittersweet and gorgeous! Well done :)

ryanbrendonlove August 22 2010, 16:08:25 UTC

Thank you so much!

nanael85 August 22 2010, 08:18:04 UTC

I have that song on my Sherlock playlist!!! You got the picture I had in mind when listening to it spot on! XD Nice to know you thought the song fitting too^^
Loved the story <3

ryanbrendonlove August 22 2010, 16:10:18 UTC

I heard it on the radio randomly the other day and as I listened all I could see was Sherlock and John. I'm glad I'm not the only one that sees a connection. And thank you!

cherish4 August 22 2010, 15:03:12 UTC

Oooh more Sherlock being vulnerable, which I do love so.

they both hear that in the crack of Sherlock’s voice as he says, “I will always need you, John.”

Awww Sherlock..*huggles him*

ryanbrendonlove August 22 2010, 16:13:16 UTC

In my mind Sherlock will always be vulnerable where John is concerned. And after I wrote this all I wanted to do was shnoogle Sherlock for hours. But I figure John's probably got that covered, so... :D

cherish4 August 23 2010, 18:48:34 UTC

"In my mind Sherlock will always be vulnerable where John is concerned"

I think that's why I love the end scene of Episode 3 so much, because we get to see that Sherlock has a heart, that he does care about someone.

"But I figure John's probably got that covered, so..."

Well there's nothing to say he can't share every now and then! LOL