Summer Time - 8

May 02, 2008 09:22

Rating: No idea where this might end up so lets be safe. NC17 
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jassylou May 2 2008, 00:22:33 UTC
Wonderful especially the tent pole in his boxers. heee *flails*.
I wonder who'll be the first to break. mmmm! I guessed but I'm not telling.(not sure I'm right). It's choc full of sexual tension,and I'm loving it.(g)
You've really worked this well and as usual its's awesome.

Thanks Julie.update soon please.
I hope you enjoyed your break?. mwah

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ryanforever May 2 2008, 12:56:21 UTC
Thanks jassy. I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

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marsalka May 2 2008, 00:38:10 UTC
oh ha. yeah, sharing the bed will be NO problem.... clever Summer!

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ryanforever May 2 2008, 12:56:49 UTC
I don't think she knows what she's letting herself in for. LOL

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thekiller00 May 2 2008, 00:40:10 UTC
WOW ! Talk about cutting the sexual tension with a knife ! I can't wait to see how their weekend alone goes.

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ryanforever May 2 2008, 12:57:19 UTC
It will be fun but 'difficult'.

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occhic321 May 2 2008, 01:06:49 UTC
Hey Julie,

I can see how this chapter proved to be difficult. But the formatting of it made it very clear.

And i love this btw. All the sexual tension. I'm very curious to see if they can make it one more night before Summer's off again, or if they'll give in. (I obviously am rooting for them to give in, lol)

Post soon,
- Sarah

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ryanforever May 2 2008, 12:59:04 UTC
I'm sure you're not the only one rooting for them to give in Sarah. I expect that 60schic will be as well.
;-)

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dcook78 May 2 2008, 02:16:00 UTC
I see how there would be problems with all the thoughts and actual lines you had in there. Not quite what I thought would happen but I love their conversation in the kitchen. Love the sexual innuendos.

Few of my favs...

I suck at lying, so I’m going to have to keep this answer short.

R: “Here we go. I hope you’re hungry.”
S: “I’m ravenous.”

R: “You’re lucky that I didn’t physically attack you.”
S: Damn. I’m hesitating. He must think I’m considering it.
S: “Why? Would it have been that bad?”

In regards to what I thought could have happened...Ryan falling out of bed as the aftershock of waking up to someone in bed with him and causing her to wake suddenly possibly falling out and then having a 'rage' moment on him. There would be more to that part, then going and having some breakfast or lunch depending on the time all of this occurred.

Looking forward to more as always.

Dee

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ryanforever May 2 2008, 13:00:49 UTC
You'll get to see lunch in the next post Dee but it may not be what you're expecting. Guess we'll have to wait and see.
Thanks for taking the time to review.

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