Summer Time - 22

[ryanforever]

Rating: No idea where this might end up so let's be safe. NC17 
Beta: Thanks 

Comments

[katwoman76]

♥ L ♥ O ♥ V ♥ E ♥

[ryanforever]

Thank you.
I'm sweating bricks here but now I can go to bed happy in the knowledge that at least someone likes it.
;-)
And yes they are.

[malinr]

They did it. Yeah!! Is there a TBC ? Hugs

[ryanforever]

Yeah - More to come. The next chapter is actually the end of this one but it was much too long so I split it in two. And then there's an epilogue to follow.

[60schic]

She was glad that the taxi had vinyl seats.

“I can’t believe that I’m saying this… to you of all people… but don’t say anything,” she whispered softly

Hee. And \0/.

I can't believe you were worried about this. It was MOST satisfying.

Now all that remains is for them to be a couple around the Cohens---and to rub Seth's face in it! (I am so mean)

[ryanforever]

It is tempting (to rub Seth's face in it) but not for this story.
Maybe if there's enough interest, it could be the reason for a sequel.
At the moment all that's left for this one is one more chapter and then an epilogue.

[fifimom]

The build up was great but the climax was wonderful. I'm really going to miss this but you've written it in such a way, it has progressed in a very organic fashion. However, if you were to decide on writing a sequel I'd love to read it.

[ryanforever]

Thank you. I am seriously considering it. There's certainly a few more ideas rattling around in my head for them. So maybe.

[bicky40]

Hi new to lj had to comment your fic is
fantastic .

[ryanforever]

Welcome and Thank you. I'm glad that your enjoying it.

[smc36]

the fireworks began
*snort* -- in more ways then one, huh??
Awesome.
I'm with Kat with the L♥O♥V♥E♥ here

[ryanforever]

I always was a fan of fireworks. LOL