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anonymous August 1 2008, 11:06:00 UTC
i really enjoyed this story! great part 2 :) all ur stories are so good!

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ryanforever August 3 2008, 22:22:43 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it.

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jazzyjackrabbit August 3 2008, 16:46:42 UTC
Mind blowing! ;) In the beginning I kept hoping that the mysterious girl would be Summer, but no such luck... Loved it.

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ryanforever August 3 2008, 22:24:49 UTC
Thanks jazzy. It's interesting that most people seemed to want to put a name and a face to the woman. I figured it was better to leave it a mystery and you could all make it whoever you wanted it to be. If is works for you for it to be Summer, then just go with that.

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jassylou August 5 2008, 00:39:18 UTC
OMG JULIE!! Pinks my fav colour now. Wonder of wonders there's something wrong with the door on my new machine,

I need to bang it hard 3 times( Quick, hard, fast) The mystery girl is definitely me,but you already knew that didn't you?.

This is for cheeks but I'm sure she'd like somemore.
How about Ryan coming to fix all our plumbing?!!LOL

Great writing and a great read for us.Thanks XD

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ryanforever August 5 2008, 03:23:55 UTC
LOL

Ryan could indeed come to fix all our plumbing. I'll go leave the door open right now!

That sort of reminds me of "Losing It". If you remember, Luke assumes that Ryan is needed to fix Marissa's plumbing, rather than the actual problem she has.

And I think that we all love pink boxers. Especially when they're NOT on Ryan!

Glad that you enjoyed it. Let's hope that cheeky likes it.

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bluedepths August 13 2008, 13:35:00 UTC
This was lovely Julie. It's been a while since I've reviewed any of your pieces, and dare I say it was because of the Ryan/Taylor pairing on those/that story/ies. This one started out as R/M for me, but then I read a comment on it definitely being R/T and that was it for me. My mind struggling to differ between a Marissa or Taylor character, sadly. We both know who I would prefer.

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ryanforever August 14 2008, 00:46:25 UTC
Good to hear from you but you have me puzzled because I have never written a Ryan/Taylor story. (And I'm not likely to.)

I did have a go at Ryan/Summer recently - but that was with them meeting up a while after Marissa had died and they both respected what she had meant to the other. She was important to both of them.

This story was never meant to be R/T. I don't know where you got that idea.

The mystery female was always meant to be just that. She could be anyone you wanted.

I had thought that cheeky could maybe envision herself in the role. But who knows?

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sheelock August 16 2008, 19:44:45 UTC
Very hot and so much fun!

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ryanforever August 18 2008, 23:06:48 UTC
Thanks. It was meant to be a bit of fun.

Makes you want to hang out in laundromats just in case. LOL

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