Fic: Out of Sight (1/2)

[ryeloza]

Title: Out of Sight (1/2)
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Word Count: 4000
Rating: PG-13
Setting: Road Trip, right after Chris interrupts Ben and Leslie on the couch
Summary: AU version of Road Trip where Ben and Leslie decide to play Boggle with Chris.
A/n: A couple of weeks ago, sunnyday678 gave me a couple of prompts about Ben and Leslie during road trip.  I had

Comments

[denmark_peru]

After a long day of work this was the PERFECT way to end the night. So lovely, can't wait for part two.

[ryeloza]

Thanks!!

[bowlsohard]

WHAT?? But Chris is right there! I need to read part 2 Stat.

[ryeloza]

I hope to have part 2 up soon!

[ashisfriendly]

His appreciation of puns aside, he’s in no mood for this right now.

HIS APPRECIATION OF PUNS ASIDE ARE YOU KIDDING ME. I just love this line more than any one person should.

So you do this thing where you make crazy simple statements but they mean so much. You also do this other thing where you can make tension palpable and I am dying right alongside everyone (except poor Chris) and it's insane. I don't understand how you achieve this, how you write perfectly constructed pieces that make me feel many things. In this case it is tension, angst, UST, and sexy all in one swoop that is almost too much. Like put the computer away and come back too much.

I need part 2, obviously, because ending it there is terrible and I want to roll in a ball and scream. But I will not be so dramatic and just wait. Great stuff, thank you.

[ryeloza]

Ahh, it makes me ridiculously happy that anyone noticed that little line. Ben's appreciation of puns (and Leslie's as well, come to think of it) is one of my favorite things ever. I love puns, especially if they're terrible.

Goodness, you hit me right in the feelings with this comment. It means a lot to me to hear you liked it. Thank you so, so much!

[ashisfriendly]

:D :D :D

Like really tho, I can try to explain some kind of feeling and it'll take me five sentences to get there adn you do it in one swoop of a few words. WHAT.

[zarrati]

That was the sexiest game of Boggle-footsies ever. You write UST so well. But now they are kissing. In Chris' kitchen. And he's like right there! I don't know if my heart can wait for part 2. Great job!

[ryeloza]

Thank you!! Hope to have part 2 up soon.

[blondebadwolf]

You write tension so freaking well. I felt like I was going to physically explode for them. Bless you or writing this. Damn you for not adding the second part yet. But ughhh it's so good. You are so effing good at writing. I just love your stories. I want to live off of your stories about games, or season three other takes.

[ryeloza]

Thank you! The tension only got worse in part two, I fear. I had way too much fun torturing them in this.