Fic: Two Hearts Are Better than One (1/4)

[ryeloza]

Title: Two Hearts Are Better than One (1/4)
Pairing/characters: Ben/Leslie with a generous helping of Chris
Word Count: 2600
Rating: PG-13
Setting: Post-Jerry's Painting
Summary: Chris decides to interfere in Ben's love life.
A/n: This is my first trope bingo fill for the trope "playing Cyrano."  It was originally supposed to be a one-shot, and

Comments

[owlsaremonsters]

There are just so many things I love about this - their texts to each other, everything Ben is thinking, Chris thinking that a cheesy line is the best way to open up to someone you like, and then the ending - damn! I can't wait to see where this goes!

[ryeloza]

Thanks! The next part is at least started, so hopefully it won't be too long a wait.

[rikyl]

Yeah, what the hell happened last night? I'm very intrigued by this!

Also, this: "The tiny furrow in her brow when she yells.” This is perfect.

[ryeloza]

Thanks!

[stillscape]

Yay, intrigue! This is such a fun premise. You know I love frustrated Ben and Not Very Helpful After All Chris, and I can't wait to find out what happened last night.

[ryeloza]

Thank you (and again times ten for the help)! I think I like writing Chris best when he's intending to be helpful and not exactly succeeding.

[courtknees1]

Oooooh! I am super interested to see where this goes! Ben being all infatuated and checking his phone all night is adorable.

[ryeloza]

Thanks!

[americnxidiot]

What the hell happened last night indeed! And “The tiny furrow in her brow when she yells.” is definitely a perfect detail.

This is so exciting. Can't wait to read more.

[ryeloza]

Thank you!