Fic: Two Hearts Are Better than One (2/4)

[ryeloza]

Title: Two Hearts Are Better than One (2/4)
Pairings/Characters: Ben/Leslie; Chris
Word Count: 2100
Rating: PG-13
Setting: Post-Jerry's Painting
Summary: Chris decides to interfere in Ben's love life.  Shenanigans ensue.
A/n: Many, many thanks to stillscape for reading through this chapter for me.  And also to those of you who commented on the previous

Comments

[hollylulamae]

You know just the place to leave us hanging! This, just like everything else you write, are so well done, I forget I'm reading and actually see all the events unfolding. You make it an effortless read! Can't wait for more!

[ryeloza]

Thank you so much!

[shornt]

Man I'm excited to see how this all shakes out, but I have to hand it to you, the way you write Chris is REALLY enjoyable and I kind of love it which is more than the majority of his episodes can say. But also oh man, Ben being all smitten and not even able to talk about how much he likes Leslie made me melt.

[ryeloza]

Thanks! I'm glad the Chris bits work since there's so much of him at the beginning of this.

[americnxidiot]

“Everyone can be a runner. It would be more correct to say she’s not a runner yet.”

oh god, that is the most chris thing hahaa. and this is great. such a clever take on the cyrano thing. thanks for updating!

[ryeloza]

Thank you!

[ashisfriendly]

I must know how natural your Chris voice is. Are you pouring over it and rewriting every line to get to this perfection or are you a master and is it a one time through type of success? I must know!

Ben is so hopelessly in love with Leslie it is wonderful. I will read every word of you putting Ben through these love sick motions. Every. Word.

[ryeloza]

Thank you! <3 <3 <3

I find Chris weirdly easy to write? I think because he has such a distinct way of speaking/thinking. Ben, on the other hand, I worry that I veer toward making too sappy sometimes.

[ryeloza]

Thanks! Part 3 will hopefully be up soon.