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ryeloza

Fic: Unity (5/?)

Nov 02, 2013 18:36

Title: Unity (5/?)
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Word Count: 2700 (this part)
Rating: PG (this part)
Setting: Post-The Comeback Kid
Summary: Loosely, this is series of moments that make up Leslie’s ideas for the unity quilt. Somewhere along the way it’s morphed into a lot more.
A/n: Well, it's been six months, but I finally wrote the next part of this story ( Read more... )

parks and rec fic, unity

Comments 21

ziplockbaggy November 3 2013, 17:48:12 UTC

Wow, this is so beautiful and wonderful and just perfect.

ryeloza November 4 2013, 21:54:40 UTC

Thank you!

rhsecretlove November 4 2013, 03:09:14 UTC

I adore this fic and I am so happy you are continuing it! You are such a lovely writer and you understand these two characters so well. These chapters are such a wonderful insight into them as characters and as a couple, especially this one.

ryeloza November 4 2013, 21:56:44 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that people are still willing to read this after such a long hiatus. And I'm so glad you liked this chapter in particular. I was hoping that it would still feel like it fit with the rest of the story :)

denmark_peru November 6 2013, 06:09:16 UTC

Haven't even read this yet but I have to comment to say how excited I am to do that. This is such a great series and I'm so glad you're continuing it!

denmark_peru November 6 2013, 06:16:42 UTC

Ok wow. This was just so masterfully written. I loved all the little details, him looking at polling numbers before bed and the glow of the computer. It's so rare to see Ben's vulnerable side handled with such care and ughh just everything about this.

ryeloza November 7 2013, 00:06:30 UTC

Thank you so, so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

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ryeloza November 18 2013, 05:32:53 UTC

I am still amazed that you read the whole thing from the beginning again, and so, so happy to hear that it seems to all flow together. I originally meant for it to be an exploration of both their families, and then I got sidetracked during the breakup. I was hoping that this chapter would still fit the way I wanted it to.

Thank you so much. Both for this comment and for your general awesomeness. You are the best. :)

ashisfriendly November 23 2013, 18:15:24 UTC

HERE IS THE EFFIN' THING ( ... )

ryeloza November 24 2013, 14:16:28 UTC

I don't even know what to say...I mean, THANK YOU, obviously, but that's so inadequate because you took the time to write these tremendously kind things and that means such a ridiculous amount to me, you don't even know. It's like, this is a incredible compliment in general, but from someone whose writing I really admire, it's kind of staggering. So yes, THANK YOU, but please know there are a lot of feelings and a bone-crushing hug behind those words.