Fic: Not That Sneaky: The Sequel (3/7)

[ryeloza]

Title: Not That Sneaky: The Sequel
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Rating: R
Word Count: 1400 (this part)
Setting: New Year's Eve season 5 (this part)
Summary: A sequel to this fic. In other words, five more times Ben and Leslie were caught/interrupted during sex.
A/n: Thank you so much to everyone who commented on this. I owe you guys more than I can possibly

Comments

[shornt]

Man, it's insane how you manage to have Ben and Leslie still be so damn SEXY in every chapter of this fic, even through someone else's POV. Goddamn. This was great! Tom's reaction was perfect, like him actually being in awe of how ballsy they are haha.

[ryeloza]

Thank you! I had the pov figured out for this chapter figured out eons ago, but it took me forever to decide where to set it to work with a Tom pov. I'm glad it seemed to work!

[ashisfriendly]

HAHAHA DEAR LORD. Flawless Tom POV?! REALLY?! How is that even possible? Dude, the sex he saw, for like the second he watched, was so hot, how do you continue to do this? You are a truly incredible human being and writer and let's hold hands forever.

[ryeloza]

DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS FOR ME TO WRITE TOM? I can't tell you what this means to me because it was the most challenging chapter I've done for this, and I was so worried that it wouldn't seem in character. THANK YOU!

[americnxidiot]

giiiiiiirl this is amazing. i honestly don't understand how you do it. also sorry for saying giiiiiirl. i'm quite tired. but i love that you manage to write the sexy stuff while preserving the humor and the voice of whatever character's pov you are writing in. you're practically a wizard. thank you!

[ryeloza]

Hahahahaha! Thank you! I'm so, so happy to hear that the voice seemed to work. I was nervous about this one.

[c00kie]

What a wonderful chapter! I loved loved loved your Tom voice. Everything was perfectly in character and sexy and clever. The ending though is a true classic.

[ryeloza]

Thanks!! The ending was the first thing I wrote for this chapter. I'm glad you liked it.

[ryeloza]

I have always been oddly fascinated by how one character views another character, which is probably why this idea appealed to me in the first place. :)

Thank you!! I'm SO glad to hear that it seemed in character. I have such a hard time writing Tom.