Fic: It Was Leslie Knope, With the Candlestick, In the Snakehole Lounge

Jan 15, 2014 18:06


Title: It Was Leslie Knope, With the Candlestick, In the Snakehole Lounge
Pairings: Janet Snakehole/Burt Macklin, Ben/Leslie, Ann/Chris
Word Count: 5600
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Burt Macklin is about the crack the biggest case of his life.
A/n: My fic for the Leslie's Birthday Exchange! Saucydiva requested a Spy AU, and probably got more than she bargained ( Read more... )

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saucydiva January 16 2014, 02:41:34 UTC
I'm bawling. I'm always, always, always pro-spy AU, and this is wonderful. The actual game just phenomenally well-crafted, and I need to call an emergency meeting of the Great Lakes Pawnee Goddesses ASAP to make them play it with me. (emilyla, throwingpens, and ballroom_pink, this is your warning). Like, I literally clapped when I realized what was going on.

The story is really cute too. I'm always pro-Janet Snakehole/Burt Macklin, and your Macklin voice always tickles me. And each of the endings is so well- crafted!

Leslie as the undercover spy pushes every single spy fantasy I've ever had to the forefront. Her and Brendanawicz as partners was adorable, and April Janet secretly hiding him was wonderful.

Ben, who just looks guilty, was absolutely perfect. I love that Burt let her go, in the end. Favorite line: "You have no idea what I've been through!"

Chris's story was a delight, and I love the double-crossing and sort-of compliments. Favorite line: "...it's clear to me that you have absolutely no knowledge that you're sleeping with a known criminal."Ann's ( ... )

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ryeloza January 21 2014, 18:55:20 UTC
Thank you!! I am so happy you like it!!! My first thought when I saw the prompt was Burt and Janet, but clearly this spiraled out of control so quickly. I think maybe I lost my mind a little (but I'm also stupidly happy with how this turned out, so who cares?). :)

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angelica_rules January 16 2014, 02:43:03 UTC
THIS IS INSANELY BRILLIANT AND YOU ARE AMAZING AND I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THIS AND I LOVE YOU. The end, by me.

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ryeloza January 21 2014, 18:56:30 UTC
THANKS SO MUCH!!

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c00kie January 16 2014, 02:50:07 UTC
Wow. That's really all I can say. Wow. This is brilliant.

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ryeloza January 21 2014, 18:56:38 UTC
Thank you!

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sullen_aquarian January 16 2014, 03:57:40 UTC
You are fucking amazing.

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ryeloza January 21 2014, 18:56:53 UTC
*hugs*

Thank you!

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stars_inthe_sky January 16 2014, 20:41:24 UTC
I am speechless with wonder.

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ryeloza January 21 2014, 18:57:27 UTC
Thanks! This definitely went off the rails a bit.

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