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ryeowook4ever

Submerged in a Twisted Musical 3/?

Sep 23, 2011 22:40

title: Submerged in a Twisted Musical 3/?
pairing: SiHan
rating: PG-13
summary:Siwon never expected for them to pop into his life like that (quite literally), especially when they say that they're there to "help" him through a romantic dilemma
notes: AU. Fantasy. Romance, drama, angst, a little humor.

( I mumbled to myself, trying to get back to sleep but a brief change in the moonlight caught my attention. I sat up and stared at the window, waiting silently for it to happen again. And soon enough, it did. It was a shadow, followed by another noise on the roof. )

Comments 11

ryeowook4ever September 24 2011, 02:50:48 UTC

catherine_leite

catherine_leite September 24 2011, 05:20:56 UTC

;A;
aw..... angsty hankyung at the beginning. ;~~~;

waiiit, whata conversation did he have with taeyeon? it's kinda secret.....

she likes hankyung? no, right????

ryeowook4ever September 25 2011, 01:53:49 UTC

i had to throw in some angst. XD angst is a part of me. ._.

hmmmm...maybe i'll reveal the conversation in later chapters. ;P

jarield September 25 2011, 08:54:01 UTC

This is getting better and better...
I love the mystery, the drawma and seemingly growing love?...

ryeowook4ever September 25 2011, 18:14:25 UTC

i'm really glad tht this story is enjoyable! ^^

thank u for commenting!

addictivemonkey September 25 2011, 16:47:46 UTC

Meeeeeeeeeeeee~~ <3

addictivemonkey September 25 2011, 17:18:36 UTC

Och, so much fun. I have this long comment but lj is just not going to let me post it -______- /brb, trying to fight it over

addictivemonkey September 25 2011, 17:20:01 UTC

This emotional Geng was fantastic. I mean, huh, no memory, everyone you knew vanishing in the back of your mind. I was like : "He's going to forget Siwon, too...". Siwon, you sweetheart Q__Q

The ending though... OMG. It's obvious, right? They just have fallen in love with each other. Right? RIGHT?! -there's no other option. no no no. *in denial* I can take only this explanation.-

“And you can see me right? Remember me?” He was pulling at his clothing as if making sure he was really there.
I love it. Well, it can be read as if he was surprised, he was still there but I like to imagine he just wants to make sure Siwon still remembers him and the other way round. Because he's important. Or maybe both explanations.

BECAUSE I'M SIHAN BIASED LIKE THAT.

And I'm sooooooooooo looking forward to the next part! I'm dying hereeeeee~~

ryeowook4ever September 25 2011, 17:28:46 UTC

did i mention tht i missed ur long comments? :D

fffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu - i dnt think i can write hannie forgetting siwon. T.T tht wud just be too sad. however there arent any promises in me not writing it. XD

lmao im not preventing u from thinking of tht. XD they cud have fallen in love with each other... :3

it wuz supposed to be written as he wuz surprised...BUT IM TOTALLY LOVING THE WANTING TO MAKE SURE THAT SIWON DIDNT FORGET HIM. >:D

DNT WRY. IM SIHAN BIASED LIKE THT TOO. >:)

i'll try to update soon! ^^

tigi_slade September 30 2011, 19:09:53 UTC

Yay! An update.

I was starting to wonder what Hankyung and the gang where doing there too. It's obvious that Siwon doesn't like Taeyeon like he is suppose too.

Please, lets have to Shihan love soon!
Great chapter!

ryeowook4ever September 30 2011, 21:36:21 UTC

Thank you for commenting!

I really want to include SiHan love BUT THE STORY JUST WON'T WORK WITH SPONTANEOUS SIHAN LOVE. >:O

And look for my next update! it's coming soon! :D