[fic] gun

Mar 02, 2009 21:19


Title: Gun

Author:
ryo_icia

Subject: one-sided Kato/Nishikido

Rating: PG

Summary: Shige is writing another essay for Myojo, what's it about this time?

Notes: this is fail. It was my first time writing a fic, wrote this earlier, for around 30 minutes, but the essay.. was an edited version of the essay I had to pass in school for English class.
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fic: one-shot

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akeru_world69 March 2 2009, 14:52:33 UTC
hey!! that was good!!
I loved the essay,it's a beautiful description of a one-sided love.

but why ryo didn't realice he is Shige's one-sided love??!! poor Shige!!

Thanks for writting!!!
chuuu~

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ryo_icia March 10 2009, 12:48:58 UTC
thank you so muuch. i'll try to make a sequel of sorts so that the ending would be happy! hahaha.

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badbatazz March 2 2009, 15:06:09 UTC
the essay is beautifully written. you are good especially about the gun analogy.

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ryo_icia March 10 2009, 12:49:26 UTC
thanks. i really thought for a long time to finish that essay.

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sanshinyia March 2 2009, 16:43:24 UTC
Come back from under that rock~ 'o' This is far from fail! ^^

The essay is, at least in my opinion, definitely something Shige might actually write. I like it, it's really good.(: &hearts And just like Ryo said, the gun analogue was really nice. Where do people get these ideas...?xD

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ryo_icia March 10 2009, 12:50:37 UTC
i came back from under the rock! hahaha.

well, i really tried to rewrite the essay that i did into a way that is almost shige-like so that it would fit. :)

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yum_gums March 2 2009, 17:45:35 UTC
nicely written. it's as if shige wrote the essay himself.
looking forward to more of your fics.

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ryo_icia March 10 2009, 12:51:12 UTC
thank you.. :) i'll try to write more when i have vacation.

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tegopii March 2 2009, 20:46:50 UTC
welkgjswdlkgjlekw <3333
Shige T____T
Shige should metaphorically commit suicide then???! and tell Ryo how he feels! and then Ryo will uh
NOT pull the trigger and love Shige back.
Because thats what Shige deserves.

yeah, the gun analogy was pretty smart. Really good job on this.

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ryo_icia March 10 2009, 12:52:20 UTC
aaaa~. it's not that shige should commit suicide.. i'll try to make a sequel of sorts to make the ending happy. hahaha. 'cuz i want a happy ending too.

thank you very much for the incoherency. <3

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