[oneshot] A Shot of Reality

Mar 25, 2009 23:58

Title: A Shot of Reality
Author: ryo_icia
Summary: Takaki's thoughts on their relationship and reality.
WC: 1148

A/N: I seem to have a thing for writing in Takaki's POV. I used a different writing style for this one. I wanted it to show spontaneity, so the style is like that. I also did it in a spontaneous manner. so forgive the mistakes *bricked* Happy 19th ( Read more... )

fic: one-shot

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ryo_icia March 26 2009, 07:37:09 UTC
your icooo~n. *shot* chibi!Ryo is cute. XD

hahaha. sankyuu. it was because of the theory that i told Jen that i made this fic. yes even i got tensed at the middle part. XD

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high5_for_akame March 26 2009, 07:28:34 UTC
these is sweet... but it is also sad

that they don't have the luxury to share a normal relationship :(

I really don't want these to happened in real life

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ryo_icia March 26 2009, 07:39:05 UTC
takayama icoo~n. *is shot agaiiiin*

yeah i know. i seem to have a knack for writing stories like that. the humor-plus-very-fluffy plot bunnies dieeee. XD

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yamashita_pink March 26 2009, 09:12:44 UTC
kawaii!!! >.

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chibilover14 March 27 2009, 04:07:02 UTC
*____________* FINALLY~! I HAS BEEN WAITING! ROFL.

SDL/KFJ ASLDJF ALSDKJFASDL/FJ KAWF I LOOOVED THIS FICCY~!!! *GLOMPS* XDDD

It definitely portrays the reality and I really loved how you wrote it, the feelings of Takaki and all. xD

Reality sucks. xDDD It sucks that they can't show their affections in public. xD

HOW I QUOTE FROM YOU? XDDD ROFL, TOO MUCH FOR MEH. XD

it was a message from you. wishing me a happy birthday. it was full of sparkles. it also had the customary aishiteru♥ that we put in our mails to each other. ever since we got together. i mailed you back thanking you for the greeting. and telling you that i miss you and of course the customary aishiteru♥ at the end.
ASLD;FJ AO;SILFKAWFSD WE ALL KNOW THAT THEY TEXT EACH OTHER EVERYDAY WITH A SWEET AISHITERU AT THE END AND MISSING STUFF. ASDL/FJ KASLDFKJAW TOO CUUUTE~! xD

our work. hinders us from being together during special occasions. new year, valentines, our birthdays and christmas. we can't celebrate those together. stupid job. even our rest days. we can't spend ( ... )

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ryo_icia March 28 2009, 04:02:43 UTC
hahaha. your wait is over. rofl.

yeay. hahaha. still in the process of reading your comment but i feel loved because it's so long. hahaha. *huggles*

ikr. reality sucks. it's the number one on my suckiest list. XD i just made one right now. rofl. the feelings here were real. i thought about how i would feel in a situatuon like it. XD i got sad from it a bit so i had to make that fluffy ending. XD that's why i said in the a/n that this was spontaneous. XD it really was. i didn't even bother to check grammar. rofl.

WE HAVE THE SAME PROBLEM! I have a hard time quoting you too. XD

of course they text each other. rofl. they can't not text each other at least 1357908642 times a day.

i knoooow. it's just sad that in general we may see idols happy on stage and stuff but they can't really act how they wish too. they are trapped. me wants too. XD

i had to insert fluff in it somehow. it's the most fluff that i can do. D: i should try writing more fluff. XD i imagined that too.cuddling!TakaYama = ♥automaticflail♥ = ASGALSJGKNMERKNM! = epic! ( ... )

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chibilover14 March 30 2009, 04:46:49 UTC
LOOOOL. XDDD

YOUR FIC HAD TOO MUCH LOVE FOR ME. LOL

Oh really? And you like writing about how reality sucks? XD
LOL, well it's so well written because you put thought into it. LOL I just make fluffiness because... it's like meh happy world. xD

LOOOOL. I LOVE QUOTING BUT IT TAAAKES A LOOONG TIME. XD

I KNOW RIGHT? IF WE WERE TO EVER STEAL TAKAKI'S PHONE AND LOOK THROUGH IT, YOU'LL SEE MOSTLY YAMADA IN TEXT MESSAGES. XDDD Someone should write a fic about that

Life sucks... we're living in it. What can we do/ LOL

DO MORE FLUFF DAMNIT~!!! XDD Angst ish alright. xD

OMFG I KNOW RIGHT?! ALSKDJF LAS;JF AWKLFASLPDF I JUST DIE WHEN I THINK ABOUT IT.

I think so, too. But I think Takaki can be serious when he wants to you know? xDDD AGREED. I THINK TAKAKI AGREES THE MOST

LOOOL. XDDD It's awesome how fanfics just turn out awesome unexpectedly? LOL YUSH, AND HAVE MORE CUTE MOMENTS TOGETHER

I CAN'T HELP IT! TAKAYAMA=MEH LIFE. *DIES* XDDDD How many lives do I even have? LOL

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kawaiisaru March 27 2009, 04:12:05 UTC
kawaiii~ ne~ <3 hair color :D kawaiii~ x3 kyaaaa~ today's my happy day~ :D lots of takayama fics~ heehee~ x3 <3

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