We shouldn't be together

Aug 17, 2012 11:22

Pairing: Aoi/ Ryuzaki (Takki/Ryo from Orthos no Inu)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, don't like don't read
Summary: Aoi and Ryuzaki are the only people on the planet who could possibly understand the other and consequently they fall in love. The problem is they are brothers and after months of dating Aoi is still trying to grapple around their tabooed ( Read more... )

we shouldn't be together

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ryo_pyon August 17 2012, 15:22:50 UTC
spot for lilly0!!

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lilly0 August 17 2012, 17:05:47 UTC
Wahhhhhhhhhh, so EXCITED! :D
Will come back as soon as possible and read it <3

Girl, this was so good!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I'm so happy you accepted my request and wrote this for me! Since I saw Orthros I wanted to read a fic with these two <3

This was amazing, Aoi and his doubts and Ryuzaki who became so strong. He has lost all his bitterness and his grudge against humans. He grew into an awesome guy!

I love it how he difused Aoi's tension, how he knew something was off and how he tried to make him feel comfortable again by cooking and distracting him.

Their talk was so heart-warming and at the same time heart-clenching. All these doubts Aoi has and all the fears Ryuzaki has that Aoi wants to break up with him. I'm so glad that they worked it out somehow and stayed together.

The smut was so hot and intense and loving!
Thanks so much for writing this awesome fic for me!! *HUUUUUUUGS*

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yukitsubute August 17 2012, 15:42:09 UTC
That was really cool. I can imagine that the situation for them is hard. They are brothers after all. But they can't do anything against their feelings. X_X

I am glad they will try it, even though it will always be a matter between them.

THe drabble was really cool, I totally loved reading it. *hugs*

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ryo_pyon August 20 2012, 22:20:06 UTC
Thanks so much. I've kind of always loved forbidden romances so this was definitely fun for me to write. But I've always felt bad when people can't overcome barriers even though they love each other and since it's a fic, I figured it was okay for a happy ending between the two.

I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for commenting! <3

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