Yeah here it is. It was a writers group excercise, just like my heading says. But heck, its a work of mine so, let me know how it moves you
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Unfortunately, poetry isn't my bag HOWEVER I'd say as a personal piece of writing, it's pretty good. My impression of poetry is that it's something more avantgard (did I spell that right?) which means that most poets look try to manipulate the language and form (like ee cummings). From what little poetry I've seen from 'aspiring' poets, I noticed it was much more intensely worded and raw than this believe or not. Not to say the subject matter is bland, it's just I heard poems where a person compared, in rather cringe-inducing graphic detail, how breaking up with someone was similar to dental surgery.
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