pelastaen, ja tappiolliset viattomat - chapter 4

[bonevalo]

Title: pelastaen, ja tappiolliset viattomat
Author: myjadedhavok (duh)
Rating: Probably an eventual NC-17, but for now PG-13
Pairing: Vam (Ville/Bam), Ryonne (Ryan/Jonne), and a slight Novak/female OC because Novak deserves love
Summery: Ville and Jonne run away from a Finnish orphanage at twelve.  Four years later they're taken off the streets and

Comments

[basketcasex39]

yay!!! this chapter was perfect! it's so cute. i can't wait for more. :)

[myjadedhavok]

Ah, thank you! *sigh* I'm actually kinda stuck. I know what I want to happen eventually, but there's at least a few chapters before it rolls around and I'm not sure what to do in them... Its very frustrating.

[basketcasex39]

that's what's happening with all the stories i'm working on at the moment. i should really stick to one, but i keep writing myself into corners and just starting new stories instead. haha. it's tough. good luck with the inbetween chapters.

[myjadedhavok]

Haha, thanks, hun. I do that a lot, too. I only post stories I'm relatively sure I'm going to finish, which is why so few of the hundreds (and I'm not exaggerating her) of fics I've started are actually posted.

Good luck with your stories as well, lol. *hugs*

[tinkertoo]

ooh I love this chapter! Hehe, they're so cute together (meaning both Ryan and Jonne, and Ville and Bam) I want more now! hehe I'm so impatient..

[xsparklex3]

I really like this. i'm glad this site finally got going.

[myjadedhavok]

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs and jumps up and down* And I'm spreadin the ryonne love to get it more going :D

[myjadedhavok]

I'm so glad you like it! *hugs* You have no idea how excited I am that people this! (you can tell by all the exclamation points. lol.)

[nicotiana666]

I didn't read this yet, but the title...

I think it should be Viattomuuden pelastaminen ja menetys/menettäminen
That's like (word by word) Innocent saving and loss/losing
And I think it's more like what you're trying to say.

If you want it more precise, just say so and describe a bit more. The phrase is really beautiful, but also hard to transalate:D

[myjadedhavok]

Okay, thank you... I'll ask Hayley to change it for me. *hugs*

[mytornromance]

That was super cute! I'm glad I saved this chappie, I needed the pick me up.

[myjadedhavok]

Yah, there's a definate cute factor...

[vivalavam2006]

I adore this so much Jessy!

[myjadedhavok]

Lol, thanks! *hugs*