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mitakay August 1 2011, 11:55:14 UTC
Oh my- Deb is super pissed.
I could see her reacting exactly like this.

You have me wondering what will happen next.
Great installment, looking forward to more. :)

I LOVE this story!

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kmboatright August 1 2011, 14:12:23 UTC
"Next time wake me up.... Preferably with your mouth." hehehe
The sex in the loft is really hot.

"Brian blinked, arching an eyebrow, pretending she hadn't just caught him leering at her son's ass." so Brian Kinney.

Brian getting Michael off in five seconds after they put the kids in the guest room? Awesome.

Disgusted with Debbie for hitting him. He can't defend himself from her. And the fact that she did it in front of Lindsay and Melanie only makes it worse. And what's with Lindsay being disgusted with Brian? If Debbie and Lindsay are going to be disgusted with anyone here, it should be Michael, since he's the "married" one. But of course they both blame Brian for everything. Grrr.

Great chapter!

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cksan August 1 2011, 16:42:29 UTC
How satisfying reading a new chapter after weeks of wating... and thank you so much! >3 ( ... )

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fuck yeahhh))))) no_pretending August 1 2011, 17:58:27 UTC
I always dislike Deb and Lindsay but in your fic i want to slap them very hard (8

OMFG!!!! I waited ALL 5 seasons for this words, god, yes)))))
"I know what I want."
"And I know what I need, even if everyone else thinks I'm wrong." "And what I want is you,"
why??? why did this not happen in serial, fuck all other relationships, because Brian and Michael are perfect together!!!

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anonymous August 5 2011, 03:07:03 UTC
This is one of the best chapters yet. I figured Deb would walk in but I love where you took that scene. Loved the Br/M scene at the end too. The whole chapter was great.

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