Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (14/36)

Jan 02, 2019 01:43


Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area reclaiming that peace starts to feel ( Read more... )

multi-chap: up in smoke

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butterfly5286 January 2 2019, 14:16:15 UTC

Uwaaaa this is an amazing surprise!! Thank you for being so sweet, but seriously you don’t have to thank me for anything.

I am looking forward to the rest of the story!! I’ll be looking forward to Fridays even more

Things are escalating so fast!!! This time they didn’t even have the chance to properly heal. Seems like the really tough times are starting. It is weird to see how comfortable they are getting with the guns, but I guess it makes sense with all that is going on

Wow so Inoo and Takaki. It’s nice to see they got someone, but i hope it is not just to not be lonely. Although it seemed like Inoo truly cares about him

I can’t wait to read the rest. I am really enjoying reading this. I love the way you tell the story and the pace it has. You are truly talented

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ryosukekoibito January 11 2019, 06:27:59 UTC
You deserve at the least a shout out, you've been amazing. ♥♥♥ We need to talk soon, I want to hear all about your concerts! JUMP and NEWS must have been amazing!!!

It is escalating fast! I'm excited about finally sharing what happens~ I am glad you noticed just how comfortable they're getting with their guns. I wanted that to be a noticeable change because of the war. They're all becoming more desensitized to violence.

Inoo and Takaki! I am really curious to see what you think about their relationship over the course of this fic. I really enjoyed writing it! It was interesting for me.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment babe! I know you're super busy, and it really means a lot! Don't push yourself too much!♥

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butterfly5286 January 12 2019, 10:43:47 UTC

Yesss I would love to talk to you about the cons. Honestly about anything, I enjoy talking to you!! So just send me a message whenever you want to talk

It really is!!! I can’t wait to see how everything unfolds

It is really evident, even Keito despite him being the most reluctant about the idea

I really want to see how that relationship progresses

Not at all!! Thank you for sharing this story. I am really enjoying it and I look forward to reading the rest!

Fridays can’t come fast enough

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sayukino11 January 2 2019, 20:02:58 UTC
Ryo-chan!!!
Hisashiburi~~~~~
Genki?
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
I was not able to read yet you and your sister's latest and/or updated stories.. (my job is eating my time and I barely have rest *sulks*) I use my vacant time on facebook only since my mobile data has not enough balance to access LJ..

Please do greet your sister for me a Happy New Year~~

love lots~

otsukare-nyan~

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ryosukekoibito January 11 2019, 06:31:20 UTC
Sayu!!! It's been a long time! I'm so excited to hear from you! Hopefully you've been well! Don't you worry about reading, none of it is going anywhere. I hope your job and everything is going okay. Take care of yourself!

I hope you have a fantastic 2019!

♥♥♥

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kei_tea January 2 2019, 22:26:18 UTC

Thank you for posting this 😃 I'll be looking forward to read the following chapters !!!

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ryosukekoibito January 11 2019, 06:32:21 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I'm always really excited to see that someone is reading my fic! Hopefully you enjoy it!

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