Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (20/36)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Explicit Sex, Major Character Death
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area

Comments

[kei_tea]

I hope everyone will get better soon, at least physically, because Ryu's death is obviously going to be hard to register... poor Chinen...
Hikaru seems to be determine,I hope everything will work out ok for them *finger crossed*

As always,thank you for your update ❤️

[ryosukekoibito]

Yeah, Ryu’s death is going to be hard for all of them. Especially Chinen.

Hikaru is definitely determined. He’s not going to just let more of his people die. He’s going to fight back and take revenge.

Thank you so much for commenting! I really appreciate that you take the time to do it!

[gothunia]

Pfff... I read this with tears in my eyes, this is just heartbreaking. I feel Hikaru's determination as well, I can't wait for them to get their revenge!
On another note our puppy Shadow does wonders calming me down

[ryosukekoibito]

OMIGOODNESS YOUR PUPPY IS SO CUTE! He’s just killing me with how cute he is~ His cute little eyes and his big paws~ I want Shadow to calm me down too!!!

Thank you for commenting! And thank you for the picture! He’s just precious!

[butterfly5286]

I am sorry I hadn’t been able to comment on the past 2 chapters, life has been a bit hectic lol

Omg Ryu!! Nooooo but honestly I have been wondering for a while when this was going to happen. When I was reading “Do scars fade” (that’s the name right?!?!?) i thought it was going to happen when he disappeared.

I can’t imagine how things are going to be like for them from now on. It’s going to be awful!! And I can’t imagine how chii is going to be.

But I also cannot imagine the hell it is going to be for Inoo. I have the feeling that takaki is going to turn completely over to Chii again

I guess it got even more personal now. I am guessing the war is going to escalate even more

Thank you so much for sharing this! I look forward to the rest

[ryosukekoibito]

Don’t worry about it! I know you’re busy!

Ryu! Yeah, honestly no one seems surprised by his death. Everyone seems to have been anticipating it. (It’s actually in Sequence of Upsets that Ryu goes missing, but I had to check my timeline to make sure.) I almost killed him in the first chapter, but in the end it worked better here.

They’re all going to have a hard time dealing with Ryutaro’s death, but Chinen is definitely the most distraught. And as for Inoo...well, you’ll have to wait and see!

I think escalation is eminent. Hikaru isn’t going to let the Wakaba get away with killing so many of his people.

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment darling! I know you’ve got a lot on your plate, and I really appreciate it! Take care of yourself, okay? Don’t work too hard!