Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (23/36)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Explicit Sex, Major Character Death
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area

Comments

[gothunia]

Chinen you stupid.... I get it, but still... You had me worried sick. Thank god he is okay!
Can't wait to read more next week! I will be in Japan by than

[ryosukekoibito]

Yeah, Chinen wasn't thinking about how other people would react to his actions. He just did what he wanted to do. It is good that he's okay though. I would have lost it if I was there and he disappeared.

Sorry! I was actually traveling in the mountains last week and I didn't have any internet. Or a computer. So I couldn't post. BUT OMIGOD JAPAN HAVE FUN!!!

[kei_tea]

Sorry I forgot to leave a comment last time 😱
I'm happy Chinen is alright! At least he should have told the others, it must have been exhausting for them, to think they had lost someone else 💗 hopefully he's fine and Shintaro too.
Keito and Hikaru were sweet too, Hikaru must be struggling to make the right decisions but also struggling with his role as kumi cho and his relationship with Keito (I loved Yuto's reaction  at the end 😂)
I love your work as always 😘😍

[ryosukekoibito]

Girl don't worry about it! I know you're probably busy and have a real life.
Chinen should have told the others, but he wasn't being rational. He was just upset, and he did what he felt was the right thing to do. What he wanted to do. That's something I've always thought was interesting about Chinen; he does what he wants. He doesn't really restrain himself if he wants something. Or wants to do something. It is good he and Shintaro had each other though.
Hikaru definitely has a tough job, but it is good that he and Keito have each other. (I loved that part at the end myself)
You are so sweet dear! Thank you for everything!

[butterfly5286]

Omg for a second there I thought Chinen and Shintaro had done something really stupid!! I can’t imagine the hell the boys went through that day

I am so glad that they came back safely

My heart is breaking for Inoo. So far it has been how I thought it was gonna be. I really hope that Takaki realizes how much he is hurting him

Poor Hikaru he is really on the verge of breaking. All those events really have been taking a big toll on him. I am glad that Keito has been there to support him

I hope life is going well for you!! I would love to talk to you sometime soon!!

Thank you for sharing this awesome story!! I look forward to the rest

[ryosukekoibito]

Yeah, even though I'm the one that wrote it this chapter always makes me tense and anxious. It's silly, because I know what's going to happen, but still. It was a hard day for everyone.

Yeah, Inoo definitely has it rough, what with Takaki's short sightedness. Poor guy.

Hikaru probably has it hardest of everyone. He's the one that has to make all of the tough decisions. It is good that Keito is there for him. Especially with Yabu unconscious.

You're so sweet darling. I hope things are going well for you too! I know you must be super busy what with school and life, but feel free to hit me up any time! I love talking with you!!!